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I will beta read your story with thoughtful narrative feedback
I will beta read your story with thoughtful narrative feedback
I’m Clara, a narrative designer and story analyst with a background in game writing and storytelling. Originally from Brazil, I developed my English skills through international experiences and by com...
About this Gig
As a narrative designer, writer, and experienced beta reader since 2014, I bring my passion for storytelling and years of experience analyzing narratives to every project. I specialize in providing constructive feedback on character development, dialogue, pacing, structure, and emotional impact, helping writers understand how their stories connect with readers.
With a background in game writing and narrative design, I have developed a strong understanding of storytelling techniques and reader engagement. My goal is to provide honest, detailed, and respectful feedback that highlights your story's strengths while identifying opportunities for improvement. I am passionate about helping writers refine their ideas and bring their stories closer to their full potential.
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English
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Portuguese
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
How would you give feedback on my work?
I will provide honest and thoughtful feedback without filters, focusing on what works and what could be improved in your story. I will review your work and share my notes through a Google Docs link with comments and suggestions, along with a PDF file containing my overall feedback and impressions.
Do you also correct grammar/spelling issues?
Yes, I will point out grammar, spelling, and clarity issues while providing feedback. My goal is to help make your writing clear, polished, and engaging while also improving the overall story experience.
Do you only work with fiction?
My main focus is fiction, including novels, short stories, fantasy, horror, romance, and character-driven stories. However, I am also open to reviewing other types of writing. Feel free to contact me with your project, and we can discuss how I can help.
My word count is different, what can I do?
If your word count does not match my packages, feel free to contact me! I can create a custom offer based on your manuscript’s length and the type of feedback you are looking for :)
