I will edit your book with copy, line, and developmental edits

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

1,900 orders completed

Gig Summary

Experienced book editor trusted by authors and publishers worldwide

Hello! I've studied book structure and the art of writing and editing for nearly 20 years. I've written novels, a memoir, and picture books, and helped 1,000+ authors strengthen their fiction and non-...

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About this Gig

Let's strategically improve what ails your novel or non-fiction book (This editing service is NOT for children's books or picture books). As a book doctor and collaborative editor, my work tightens the narrative flow, identifies plot holes, inconsistencies, and missed story beats, all while making dialogue and scenes more impactful with line editing and margin comments. This attention to detail ensures strong reader engagement while preserving your voice and story arc.

 

I offer:


  • Line editing for enhanced clarity, flow, and readability
  • Developmental feedback on structure and more
  • Detailed margin comments and sample paragraph rewrites
  • Editorial or reader analysis tailored to your goals


Please scroll through my reviews, the image gallery, my portfolio, and look online for insight into past projects across almost all genres.


I will return the following:


  • Edited Word doc showing comments and tracked changes
  • Clean doc with edits accepted
  • Screenshot of Word's count of edits
  • Feedback and final thoughts


I look forward to helping you sharpen your manuscript and bring your story to life!

 

Warm Regards,

Cindy Draughon

Language:

English

Genre:

Children’s books

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Literary fiction

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Fantasy

Audience :

General readers

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Children

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Teen / young adult

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Adult

Tone:

Informal

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Conversational

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Humorous

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Serious

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Emotional

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Dramatic

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Clients I’ve worked with
Holly Bargo

Holly Bargo

I've edited 20 book manuscripts for Karen Smith (pen name: Holly Bargo) through Hen House Publishing. I deliver a deep edit that includes a developmental analysis. Once she addresses my comments, I read through the 'script again for a final proof.

Dec 2022-Dec 2022

My Portfolio

Reviews

475 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(465)
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(3)
(1)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
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    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
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    docscottjohnson

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Cindy is a top-notch editor! Her eye and talent for editing literary fiction is unsurpassed. Her recommendations elevated my book and helped it become what I envisioned. She has a knack for identifying continuity issues and what might confuse a reader, which allows me to make corrections and improve...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    ashleyandtiff

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy did an exceptional job editing my short story!! She gave thoughtful comments that explained her reasonings for different changes and offered helpful suggestions on how to improve the writing! If I ever need editing done in the future, she’ll be the first I reach out to!

    $100-$200

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    chrisfaust901

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Amazing—exactly what I needed. There were so many useful things I’d completely missed. I’ve read through my novel's chapter countless times, and I never realised just how much I was overlooking. I absolutely recommend to anyone who wants professional help!

    $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • W
    image-docs

    wolfwriter928

    US

    United States

    5

    This service was a great value. Cindy offered me both line edits, which were very helpful, as well as developmental feedback where some of my chapter was confusing and needed clarification. Everything offered was clear and actionable. Would work with again. Thank you!

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    temahlynn

    US

    United States

    5

    Great feedback. She also is able to set boundaries about what she can and cant' do. I admire that. She was able to get the work back to me days before it was expected. Thanks so much! I highly recommend her.

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

475 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(465)
(6)
(3)
(1)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • D
    image-docs

    docscottjohnson

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Cindy is a top-notch editor! Her eye and talent for editing literary fiction is unsurpassed. Her recommendations elevated my book and helped it become what I envisioned. She has a knack for identifying continuity issues and what might confuse a reader, which allows me to make corrections and improve...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    ashleyandtiff

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy did an exceptional job editing my short story!! She gave thoughtful comments that explained her reasonings for different changes and offered helpful suggestions on how to improve the writing! If I ever need editing done in the future, she’ll be the first I reach out to!

    $100-$200

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    chrisfaust901

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Amazing—exactly what I needed. There were so many useful things I’d completely missed. I’ve read through my novel's chapter countless times, and I never realised just how much I was overlooking. I absolutely recommend to anyone who wants professional help!

    $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • W
    image-docs

    wolfwriter928

    US

    United States

    5

    This service was a great value. Cindy offered me both line edits, which were very helpful, as well as developmental feedback where some of my chapter was confusing and needed clarification. Everything offered was clear and actionable. Would work with again. Thank you!

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T
    image-docs

    temahlynn

    US

    United States

    5

    Great feedback. She also is able to set boundaries about what she can and cant' do. I admire that. She was able to get the work back to me days before it was expected. Thanks so much! I highly recommend her.

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No