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I will do developmental editing and manuscript critique for your fiction novel
Book editor
Every memorable novel is built on strong story architecture. I am a professional fiction book editor specializing in developmental editing, manuscript critiques, and structural plot audits for self-pu...
About this Gig
You receive a comprehensive developmental manuscript edit delivered as a tracked-changes MS Word document (.docx) alongside an in-depth editorial letter in PDF format, engineered for Amazon KDP, IngramSpark, or agent querying.
Every critique applies my signature D.E.E.P. Framework:
Direction & Structure: Fixing plot holes, weak transitions, and pacing lags.
Emotional Stakes: Heightening narrative tension, world-building & dialogue flow.
Entity & Character Arcs: Deepening character motivations, growth & voice.
Publishing Report: In-depth PDF editorial letter plus inline MS Word comments.
Self-published authors receive actionable story coaching that prepares your book for market success while strictly protecting your creative vision. Whether you write romance, fantasy, sci-fi, thriller, YA, or horror, your story is refined with rigorous developmental feedback tailored to active readers in your subgenre.
TEST-DRIVE MY EDITING RISK-FREE: Send your opening 1,000 words for a complimentary developmental sample critique before placing your full order! Message me your manuscript excerpt, total word count, or synopsis today to receive a free sample and instant custom quote.
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is covered in a deep developmental pass?
I evaluate big-picture story architecture using my signature D.E.E.P. Framework: plot structure, narrative pacing, scene transitions, emotional conflict, worldbuilding, and character arcs. You get actionable guidance to prepare your manuscript for Amazon KDP, IngramSpark, or agent querying.
What files will I receive upon completion?
You receive two core deliverables: an in-depth PDF editorial letter detailing structural strengths and revision recommendations, plus your manuscript in MS Word (.docx) format with detailed inline margin comments and tracked changes.
Will developmental editing alter my story vision or voice?
Never. A developmental edit pass strengthens your story foundation, character motivations, and narrative tension while strictly protecting your authentic creative vision, style, and storytelling voice across all fiction subgenres.
Should I get a developmental edit before line editing?
Yes. Developmental editing fixes foundational elements like plot holes, pacing lags, and character arcs. Polishing prose mechanics and grammar comes after your story structure is 100% solid, saving you time and rewrite costs.
Can I get a sample critique before ordering the full gig?
Absolutely! Send me your opening 1,000 words along with your fiction genre and total word count for a complimentary sample critique. It is a risk-free way to preview my developmental feedback before placing your order.
