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I will beta read your childrens book and give honest feedback
About this Gig
I have a Bachelors Degree in Communications and I am a published Children's Book Author.
I specialize in beta-reading children's books and I've helped numerous authors get their books published. I understand the passion you have for your story and I want to help you succeed in your publishing goals.
After you've spent hours reading and re-reading your story it is important to have a fresh set of eyes read your work. I am excited to be that person for you!
I will:
- Provide a readers report with my analysis of the following:
Plot, Tone, Pacing, Character Development
- Identify plot holes
- Point out confusing dialog
- Suggest opportunities for improvement
Please Note
- I may give slight feedback on spelling and grammar but that is not the intended purpose of this gig.
- I do NOT write paid reviews on Amazon. Please do not ask.
- Please only submit one story per order. If you have two 500 word stories, that is two separate orders.
I am ready to help. Please place your order today!
If your story is longer than 10,000 words please contact me about a custom gig. I'm always happy to help!
If you are interested in editing and re-writing please see my other gig https://www.fiverr.com/daniellelynn5
Genre:
Children’s books
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Reviews
156 reviews for this Gig
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M margaretmacyjoy
United States
Danielle delivered just what I needed. She suggested revisions I would never have considered. She also delivered the work much sooner than expected. Thank you, Danielle! I hope to work with you again.
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?L laurabug35
United States
Danielle was very thoughtful in her feedback and her suggestions were very helpful! I would definitely recommend her to new and experienced writers alike!
Up to $50
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J juniper_douglas
United States
Danielle provided exceptional, constructive feedback that made it easy for me to see several different ways I could make my story and characters more engaging and age appropriate. I highly recommend her services!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?C 
creativethisway
United States
I appreciate the personal feedback on the plot and character development as well as suggestions regarding the character and those around him. And I can understand the questions Danielle had as there were some confusion in the story. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?B brucek2024
Repeat Client
United States
This is the 2nd book that Danielle read for me. She does a great job of understanding the material and making suggestions for improvement. Also, and few excellent points about where the story didn't work. This is crucial in making a final version. Thank you!
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
156 reviews for this Gig
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| (3) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
M margaretmacyjoy
United States
Danielle delivered just what I needed. She suggested revisions I would never have considered. She also delivered the work much sooner than expected. Thank you, Danielle! I hope to work with you again.
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?L laurabug35
United States
Danielle was very thoughtful in her feedback and her suggestions were very helpful! I would definitely recommend her to new and experienced writers alike!
Up to $50
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J juniper_douglas
United States
Danielle provided exceptional, constructive feedback that made it easy for me to see several different ways I could make my story and characters more engaging and age appropriate. I highly recommend her services!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?C creativethisway
United States
I appreciate the personal feedback on the plot and character development as well as suggestions regarding the character and those around him. And I can understand the questions Danielle had as there were some confusion in the story. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?B brucek2024
Repeat Client
United States
This is the 2nd book that Danielle read for me. She does a great job of understanding the material and making suggestions for improvement. Also, and few excellent points about where the story didn't work. This is crucial in making a final version. Thank you!
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?
