I will provide developmental feedback for your fiction manuscript

I'll read your manuscript and give you clear, honest developmental feedback you can use to revise.

I evaluate what makes or breaks a story: plot structure, pacing, character arcs, voice, point of view, worldbuilding, and opening hooks. Every package includes an annotated manuscript, and larger packages add series development notes.

I work in all fiction genres, specializing in thriller, science fiction (especially military), and post-apocalyptic.

About me: I'm a Marine combat veteran (Infantry Unit Leader), firefighter/AEMT, and fiction writer with a Master's in English and Creative Writing. I've taught adults and learners transitioning to adulthood for 26 years, so my feedback is direct, organized, and built to help you improve.

Want to talk it through? Add a one-on-one video call to go over your feedback live.

Message me before ordering with your word count and genre.