The first 10 pages are essential to hooking a reader.
I'm a huge nerd, ghost writer, and screenwriter (of every genre).
I'm a fan of art and popcorn. This outcast will provide full coverage - from storytelling and characters, to style and metaphor for your opening 10 pages.
Grammar and formatting isn't the point here (although it is available as editing). The goal is to hook the audience right away and establish your world. I am also available to continue the process for the full script.
If you want in-depth page by page analysis (10+ pages of notes worth) and commentary, as well as creative options to embellish your intentions, I can help.