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I will beta read and give reader feedback for fantasy romance
Blog post, articles, book proofreader and editor
Hi! I'm Nipobithi, the creative mind behind DarkStorm99. I'm a detail-oriented editor and proofreader dedicated to making your writing shine. With a strong command of English and a passion for clear, ...
About this Gig
Need a trustworthy beta reader who gets fantasy-romance? I provide clear, constructive feedback on plot, romance chemistry, pacing, characters, and worldbuilding so you can polish your manuscript with confidence.
What I do:
I read fantasy-romance manuscripts and deliver a readers reaction plus practical, actionable notes. My feedback covers: overall impressions, plot/structure, character arcs, romantic tension & beats, pacing, worldbuilding consistency, POV/voice, and clear suggestions for revision. I stay constructive and author-positive.
Why work with me:
- I specialize in fantasy + romance and know genre expectations (romantic beats, heat vs tension, slow-burn arcs).
- Balanced: I say what works and what to fix, with concrete fixes you can apply.
- Clear deliverables: concise summary + prioritized list of fixes.
Genre:
Romance
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you do line edits / proofreading?
I offer developmental beta reading by default. I have separate gigs for that, check those out if you're interested.
Do you rewrite or ghostwrite?
No. I provide feedback and suggested text examples; I don’t ghostwrite entire scenes unless a separate gig is purchased.
How much can I send?
Each package lists a max word count. If your manuscript is longer, choose Premium or purchase extra-word add-ons.
Do you edit books?
I beta read in this gig, I have a separate gig for book editing for authors!
