I will provide professional screenplay coverage and story development notes
About this Gig
Are you looking for more than generic screenplay feedback?
I'm a film and television development professional with experience as a Showrunner's Assistant on Peacock's Teacup, supporting the development and production process from script to screen. I've also worked with producers, directors, and executives across premium television, feature films, and documentary projects.
Whether you're writing a feature screenplay, TV pilot, short film, or series concept, I'll provide actionable notes designed to strengthen your story and identify opportunities for improvement.
My coverage focuses on:
Concept & premise
Story structure
Character arcs
Dialogue
Pacing
Theme
Stakes & conflict
Commercial viability
Rewrite recommendations
You'll receive honest, constructive feedback that goes beyond pointing out problems. My goal is to help you understand what's working, what isn't, and how to move your script closer to its strongest possible version.
Perfect for:
Screenwriters
Filmmakers
Contest submissions
Fellowship applications
Producers seeking script evaluations
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you proofread as well?
Yes, but only if you add the "Proofread Gig Extra". If you do that I will note every single error and typo in the script.
Do your notes cover structural issues as well as formatting issues?
Yes, I detail structural issues as well as formatting issues.
Do your notes include industry expectations and current studio mandates?
Yes, as an industry insider, I remain vigilant on what is trending and what studio buyers are mandating in features and TV.

