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I will beta read and critique your fantasy manuscript
Gig Summary
Hi there! My name is Debbie. I'm from Australia. I'm a passionate reader, writer, and self-published author who lives and breathes the written word. Over the last ten years, I have devoted myself to l...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
vovila
United States
I am very happy with the beta read Deborah provided. She read my manuscript carefully and made professional comments that will improve my book. I chose her...
villyard
United States
If you're looking for feedback from a REAL HUMAN who reads closely and understands what you're trying to do with your story, Deborah June is well worth the...
bigreds_1986
United States
She was very kind and worth every bit of it. The information has made my book tremendously better. I do appreciate everything she has did and would love to...
joanne5555
Singapore
This is the second time I have worked with Deborah. As usual, she did a stunning job reviewing my manuscript. Her report is very thorough and actionable and...
athinakarp
Australia
I am beyond happy with Deborah's work. Her in-line comments and notes were exactly what I needed in the document. And then her report topped it off perfectly...
About this Gig
I will provide clear, honest feedback for your fiction manuscript.
*Please message me before placing your order to confirm availability.
For this gig, I require:
- Your manuscript as a Word doc/docx.
I offer three beta packages depending on the depth of feedback you're looking for:
Basic Reader Reaction Beta (up to 10K words)
Engaged reader impressions and emotional reactions. This package focuses on how the story feels to read, including moments of confusion or plot holes. Limited margin comments and actionable insights.
Standard Story-Level Beta + Report (up to 40K words)
Selective margin comments plus a feedback report covering plot, pacing, characters, and key revision priorities. Includes actionable suggestions.
Premium In-Depth Beta + Full Report (up to 100K words)
Full margin comments and a comprehensive feedback report analysing story structure, character arcs, world-building, and emotional impact. Includes actionable suggestions.
*Each package includes a maximum word count.
Please add extra words before ordering if needed.
If your manuscript greatly exceeds my max word count of 100K, please contact me for a custom offer.
I look forward to working with you!
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What subgenres of fantasy do you work with?
I read all subgenres of fantasy fiction.
Can I ask specific questions about my manuscript?
Basic package: 1 area of concern/interest or question. Standard package: Up to 2 questions. Premium package: Up to 4 questions. Questions must be provided before reading begins and will be addressed within the feedback or report.
Do you provide line edits, corrections, or rewrites?
No. This gig is strictly a beta reading service. I do not provide line editing, proofreading, copyediting, or rewriting in any package.
What if my manuscript exceeds the word count limit?
Each package includes a maximum word count. If your manuscript exceeds the listed limit, please add the appropriate extra word count before ordering. If your manuscript greatly exceeds 100K (140K+), please contact me before ordering.
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V vovila
United States
I am very happy with the beta read Deborah provided. She read my manuscript carefully and made professional comments that will improve my book. I chose her based on her reviews, and she lived up to my expectations. I will definitely come back to her with my future projects and recommend her to others.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?V villyard
United States
Ongoing collaborationIf you're looking for feedback from a REAL HUMAN who reads closely and understands what you're trying to do with your story, Deborah June is well worth the cost. She did a great job with both this manuscript and my previous one.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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Helpful?B bigreds_1986
United States
She was very kind and worth every bit of it. The information has made my book tremendously better. I do appreciate everything she has did and would love to see if she would want to read my entire book all 19 chapters.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?J joanne5555
Singapore
Ongoing collaborationThis is the second time I have worked with Deborah. As usual, she did a stunning job reviewing my manuscript. Her report is very thorough and actionable and her line comments are thoughtful and informative. Overall, her feedback is honest and human. I would definitely work with her again. I highly recommended her.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A athinakarp
Australia
I am beyond happy with Deborah's work. Her in-line comments and notes were exactly what I needed in the document. And then her report topped it off perfectly with how in-depth it was. It covered every possible question I had regarding my story. Her advice and input are all spot on and actionable; things...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
D Seller's Response
Helpful?
Reviews
159 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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V vovila
United States
I am very happy with the beta read Deborah provided. She read my manuscript carefully and made professional comments that will improve my book. I chose her based on her reviews, and she lived up to my expectations. I will definitely come back to her with my future projects and recommend her to others.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?V villyard
United States
Ongoing collaborationIf you're looking for feedback from a REAL HUMAN who reads closely and understands what you're trying to do with your story, Deborah June is well worth the cost. She did a great job with both this manuscript and my previous one.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
D Seller's Response
Helpful?B bigreds_1986
United States
She was very kind and worth every bit of it. The information has made my book tremendously better. I do appreciate everything she has did and would love to see if she would want to read my entire book all 19 chapters.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?J joanne5555
Singapore
Ongoing collaborationThis is the second time I have worked with Deborah. As usual, she did a stunning job reviewing my manuscript. Her report is very thorough and actionable and her line comments are thoughtful and informative. Overall, her feedback is honest and human. I would definitely work with her again. I highly recommended her.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A athinakarp
Australia
I am beyond happy with Deborah's work. Her in-line comments and notes were exactly what I needed in the document. And then her report topped it off perfectly with how in-depth it was. It covered every possible question I had regarding my story. Her advice and input are all spot on and actionable; things...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
D Seller's Response
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