I will do romance developmental editing and fiction manuscript critique

United Kingdom

I speak Spanish

Developmental, copy and line editor

Hello I'm Mary, a professional writer, editor, and self-published author with over many years of experience in content creation, eBook publishing, and digital storytelling. I hold a Master of Arts (MA...
About this Gig

Looking for an experienced romance developmental editor to elevate your plot, polish character arcs, and make your tropes hit every emotional beat?


As a dedicated fiction editor, I provide in-depth developmental editing tailored specifically to romance. Whether you write sweet contemporary, high-heat paranormal, or epic romantasy, I help you craft an unputdownable story.


WHAT I EVALUATE:

  • Plot & Pacing: Fixing plot holes, sagging middles, and narrative flow.
  • Character Arcs & Chemistry: Aligning GMC (Goals, Motivation, Conflict) so connections feel organic.
  • Trope Execution: Optimizing popular tropes to meet reader expectations.
  • World-Building & Tone: Ensuring immersive settings and consistent voice.
  • Heat & Tension: Balancing emotional intimacy and spice for your sub-genre.


WHAT YOU RECEIVE:

  • In-Line Margin Comments: Real-time reader reactions and direct suggestions via Word Track Changes.
  • Editorial Letter: Detailed report covering structural feedback with actionable advice.


SUB-GENRES: Contemporary, Romantasy, Dark, Paranormal, Rom-Com, Historical.


Send me a message with your word count, sub-genre, and logline before ordering!

Language:

English

Genre:

Romance

Audience :

General readers

POV:

First person

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Second person

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Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

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Intermediate

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Advanced

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