I will be your young adult fiction beta reader with honest feedback

United States

I speak English

109 orders completed

Expert Beta Reader

Hello! I'm Devyn (pronounced Devin). With over 6 years of experience as a professional ghostwriter, I’ve helped shape novels, memoirs (including one for a high-profile music family), and stories spann...
About this Gig

I will beta read your young adult fiction manuscript and provide honest feedback on pacing, characters, dialogue, and reader engagement.


Are you writing the next must-read YA novel? Whether your story is a dystopian thriller, coming-of-age romance, or school drama with a twist, I'll provide honest, detailed, and reader-savvy feedback tailored for the Young Adult market.


With a background in ghostwriting and beta reading across multiple fiction genres, including romance, fantasy, and urban lit, I understand what makes a young adult story compelling, fresh, and emotionally grounded.


I don't just read your work, I assess your characters, pacing, dialogue, plot structure, and whether your story hits with its intended audience.


What's Included:

  • Constructive, in-line comments (as needed)
  • Summary feedback on strengths & improvement areas
  • Notes on pacing, flow, character believability, and emotional pull
  • Honest impressions from a reader's lens with editorial insight
  • YA tone consistency + genre clarity


Services Offered: 

  • Novellas
  • Novels

 

Genres Offered:

  • Romantic Comedy
  • Coming of Age
  • Drama
  • Fantasy
  • Sci-fi
  • Suspense
  • Thriller


What I Don't Offer:

  • Nonfiction or memoirs

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Humor/ entertainment

Mystery

Romance

Language:

English

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