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I will beta read your lgbtq sapphic romance manuscript to give actionable feedback
Thriller, Mystery, and Romance Story Development
Hi my name is Donna moore, I am a fiction writer and editorial reader with experience supporting authors through beta reading, proofreading, editing, and formatting. I focus on storytelling, structure...
About this Gig
Your sapphic or LGBTQ romance needs someone who really understands it.
I think getting queer representation right is super important, and it is not about saying we did it; it is about writing a love story that really affects the LGBTQ community. As your LGBTQ romance beta reader, I read your story like a fan of queer romance, and I have read a lot of sapphic and queer love stories.
What you receive as your LGBTQ romance beta reader:
- I look at the pacing and the tension and how it will makes reader feel
- I give you feedback, on the romance and if it feels real
- I tell you about your characters and if they seem to be real people and if they talk like real people
- I give honest feedback on each scene in your Google Doc/MS Word.
- I give Full manuscript critique or chapter-by-chapter feedback on your story
I read your manuscript like someone who really cares about your story, and I tell you everything that reader would think but not say to you.
Ready to make your story something queer readers recommend to everyone they know?
Message me before ordering.
Have questions? Check the FAQ below for word count, delivery, and what to expect.
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you beta read?
I specialize in LGBTQ romance, sapphic romance, and queer romance fiction, including contemporary, paranormal, fantasy, and new adult. If your story centers a queer love story, I will love to be your reader.
What exactly will I receive when my beta read is done?
You will receive scene-by-scene In-line comments directly inside your Google Doc or MS Word, covering pacing, tension, chemistry, character depth, dialogue, and emotional impact. You will know exactly where your story is working and where it is losing readers.
Do you understand queer and Sapphic representation?
Yes. I have read hundreds of queer and Sapphic love stories. I will read your manuscript as a genuine fan of the genre not someone checking a diversity box. I understand the tropes, the community expectations, and what makes queer romance readers stay up all night finishing a book.
My story has sensitive themes. trauma, identity struggles, explicit content. Is that okay?
Absolutely. Queer romance often explores complex emotional territory and I read without judgment. My feedback focuses purely on how effectively your story serves your readers nothing else.
How do I send you my manuscript?
Share it as a Google Doc with commenting access enabled. This allows me to leave in-line feedback directly on your pages so you can see exactly where each note applies.
How long will the beta read take?
Delivery time depends on your word count. Please message me before ordering so we can agree on a realistic timeline that works for both of us.
Can I ask follow-up questions after receiving my feedback?
Yes. I offer one round of follow-up clarification so you fully understand my notes before you begin revisions.
