I will developmental edit your romantasy novel for plot, pacing and character

United States

I speak English, German, Spanish

Professional Developmental Editor

Hi, I am Donna Voss, a professional developmental editor dedicated to helping authors turn good manuscripts into compelling, well structured books. I specialize in story structure, plot development, c...
About this Gig

Is your romantasy novel not quite delivering the emotional impact you imagined?


You may have a great story idea, but struggle with slow pacing, weak character arcs, plot holes, an underdeveloped romance, or worldbuilding that feels confusing or inconsistent.

Thats where developmental editing can help.


I am Donna Voss, a professional developmental editor who helps authors strengthen their stories while preserving their unique voice and vision.


For your romantasy manuscript, I will provide clear, practical feedback on:

  • Plot & story structure
  • Pacing & chapter flow
  • Character arcs & motivations
  • Romantic tension & emotional development
  • Conflict, stakes & reader engagement
  • Fantasy worldbuilding & consistency
  • Plot holes & story weaknesses


Youll receive honest editorial guidance that helps you understand what isnt working, why it matters, and where your story can become stronger.


Whether you are revising a draft or preparing for publication, I will help you see your manuscript more clearly and move forward with confidence.


Ready to strengthen your romantasy story? Lets get started!

Language:

Danish

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Dutch

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English

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Japanese

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Spanish

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Business management

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Children’s books

Audience :

General readers

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Children

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Teen / young adult

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Adult

POV:

First person

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Second person

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Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

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Intermediate

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Advanced

Voice:

Narrative

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