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I will professionally beta read your first chapter or short story
Gig Summary
Full time Fiverr, Beta Reader, Proofreader, Translator
Hi! I'm Gil, and I'm a writer. I'm well versed in beta reading, proofreading, translations, and content writing.
Let's get started! Send me a message and I will respond ASAP.
I work full-time on...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
About this Gig
Want honest feedback that actually helps your story get better?
If you want your story to be great, you need more than nice comments. You need real feedback. I read your work and tell you what's working and what's not. My feedback is honest and direct it might be hard to hear, but it will help you grow as a writer.
Quick note: You'll get comments and a written report not a rewrite. I won't fix your grammar or change your sentences. I show you where the problems are and why, so you can fix them yourself.
What you get:
- Comments inside your story notes on what I liked, what confused me, and ways to improve your characters, plot, pacing, and world.
- A short report (1-3 pages) on your story's big strengths and weaknesses, plus clear questions to guide your revisions.
- Clear next steps not just "this is weak," but exactly what to fix.
Works for: your first chapter or a full short story.
Genres: fantasy, sci-fi, romance, thriller, historical fiction, adventure, and more. English and Spanish welcome!
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Fantasy
Language:
English
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Spanish
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you read in any other languages?
Yes, I'm fluent in writing and reading Spanish! I'm from Mexico!
Do you read longer works?
Absolutely! I have another gig for it! https://www.fiverr.com/share/3yPYex
Do you read non-fiction?
I do! Please, feel free to message me if you have any questions.
I have another question
Great! Just message me and I'll be quick to reply!
Reviews
27 reviews for this Gig
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U user10344386
United States
Gil was an excellent beta reader and incredibly thoughtful in his approach. His feedback was detailed, perceptive, and genuinely useful, and it was clear throughout that he had actually read and analyzed the material carefully. Nothing about his responses felt generic, automated, or AI-generated; his...
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?M 
melayna_c
United States
Very professional, fast delivery, he even moved things around in his schedule to deliver this to me early. Would highly recommend his services if you're wanting to write a novel or a screenplay like I am. :) Thanks so much, this was so helpful!
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?R rafaelito_sy
United States
Gil clearly put time and energy into my first chapter. His comments were honest.
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?S 
siennaday
United States
Ongoing collaborationThis is my second time working with Gil and once again I have nothing negative to say. His review was thorough and his feedback was great. He also delivered the critique in less that 24 hours, despite have days to get it done. I would definitely recommend him as a beta reader!
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?J 
josemyfriend
Chile
Gracias por darme tu opinión. Me ha hecho mejorar.
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
27 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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U user10344386
United States
Gil was an excellent beta reader and incredibly thoughtful in his approach. His feedback was detailed, perceptive, and genuinely useful, and it was clear throughout that he had actually read and analyzed the material carefully. Nothing about his responses felt generic, automated, or AI-generated; his...
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?M melayna_c
United States
Very professional, fast delivery, he even moved things around in his schedule to deliver this to me early. Would highly recommend his services if you're wanting to write a novel or a screenplay like I am. :) Thanks so much, this was so helpful!
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?R rafaelito_sy
United States
Gil clearly put time and energy into my first chapter. His comments were honest.
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?S siennaday
United States
Ongoing collaborationThis is my second time working with Gil and once again I have nothing negative to say. His review was thorough and his feedback was great. He also delivered the critique in less that 24 hours, despite have days to get it done. I would definitely recommend him as a beta reader!
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?J josemyfriend
Chile
Gracias por darme tu opinión. Me ha hecho mejorar.
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?
