Eddier Ovando

I'm very satisfied with Eddier's review. He delivered a thorough and comprenhesive report that highlighted important aspects of the story, its strengths and weaknesses, his personal opinion on plot, pacing , coherence etc., as well as dedicating a significant part of the review to the more technical aspects of the story.

Working with Eddier was exactly what I needed to elevate my story. His analysis and recommendations helped me see things in my writing that would have been impossible for me to see on my own. His commitment to the detailed elements of my novel and honest feedback have made my it so much better. He... See more

Eddier was fantastic. You can tell the difference between a reader who's checking boxes and one who actually sat inside your story, and Eddier is the latter. His feedback was specific, actionable, and grounded in what the book was actually trying to do rather than what he thought it should be. He pointed... See more

Was very helpful in his feedback, talked about the good and the bad honestly and I already suspected the manuscript needed work there but its a great confirmation. He also went really in depth on talking about the development of the worldbuilding and characters. I think based on his feedback I will be able to improve the story.

He gives great detail on the science for anyone doing science fiction or science fantasy. His feedback is well written and detailed going over the arcs of the characters, the story overall, and his thoughts on where it can be improved on.