Usman E

I posted on Tumblr looking for a beta reader for a one-shot fanfiction, and UsmanEditingSuit responded very quickly with an offer to help! Their feedback was valuable and helped to make my story better. They sent a detailed response including strengths of the scene, character observations, suggestions... See more

thanks for going over this chapter and let me know that what I got down works. I feel better that this chapter gives some good inside of the world that's emerged I'm also working through other chapters to flash out this environment to make sure it feels alive and understood.

thank you for reading over this chapter and let me know what I need to improve. I'll add a little more detail to make the relationships feel a little more fleshed out and more emotionally intimate with Kore's current life.

thank you for looking over these chapters. You provided some insight off what I need to add to the end of the story to make it flow a little better into the rest of the novel. thank you for highlighting that I need to add a little more details for the section pertaining to Libra's time with Spartacus. thank you

thanks for looking over this chapter and give me points that my rewrite is going in the right direction. thank you I will take the further details to hard and work them into the story in the future. thank you