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I will edit, rewrite, and improve your fiction manuscript
Book Editor Rewriting Adaptation and Story Development specialist
I’m Natalie, a published fiction author, book editor, and story consultant. I work with fiction at any stage: from idea development and ghostwriting to developmental editing, rewriting, English-langua...
About this Gig
Your manuscript may already have a strong idea. My job is to make sure the execution is just as strong.
I provide developmental editing and rewriting for adult fiction, with a focus on psychological thrillers, mystery, suspense, and literary fiction.
I look at the manuscript as a whole: structure, pacing, character motivation, tension, dialogue, continuity, scene purpose, emotional impact, and overall readability.
Depending on the package, I can:
- identify structural weaknesses and plot issues
- strengthen pacing, tension, and scene flow
- improve dialogue and character voice
- rewrite weak or awkward passages
- flag continuity problems and logic gaps
- refine character arcs and motivation
- improve clarity, tone, and readability
- provide an annotated manuscript with practical, specific notes
My goal is not to overwrite your voice. I work to preserve what is already strong while making the manuscript cleaner, sharper, and more commercially effective.
I am a published fiction author and story consultant with hands-on experience in novel development, rewriting, English-language adaptation, literary submissions, and book-to-screen adaptation.
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Language:
English
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Russian
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Ukrainian
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
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Literary fiction
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Mystery
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Other
Audience :
General readers
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Adult
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Do you rewrite the manuscript or only provide comments?
Depending on the package, I can do both. I provide developmental feedback, annotated manuscript notes, and hands-on rewriting where needed to strengthen structure, pacing, dialogue, clarity, and character voice.
Will you change my writing style or author voice?
No. My goal is to strengthen the manuscript without replacing your voice. I preserve what already works and focus on improving structure, readability, pacing, dialogue, consistency, and emotional impact.
What genres do you work with?
I primarily work with adult fiction, especially psychological thrillers, mystery, suspense, crime, and literary fiction. If your manuscript falls outside these genres, feel free to message me before ordering.
Can you edit a full-length novel?
Yes. For manuscripts longer than the word counts listed in my packages, please contact me for a custom offer based on the total word count and the level of editing or rewriting required.
What file format should I send?
Microsoft Word (.docx) is preferred because it allows me to work directly in the manuscript and provide clear comments and edits. If you only have a PDF or another format, message me first and I will confirm whether it can be used.
