I will do beta reading, alpha reading, developmental edit, structural editing, romance

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

4 orders completed

Turning Good Stories into Great Reads

A fresh set of eye can make all the difference before you publish I provide thoughtful beta reading and alpha reading feedback to help you understand how readers experience your story. You'll receive...
About this Gig

Welcome to Lisa's Beta Reading Service!


Are you looking for objective feedback on your writing? Unsure if your story is cohesive, your characters are engaging, or your plot keeps readers interested?


Sometimes, after reading your manuscript over and over, it becomes difficult to see what a fresh reader might notice. A slow section, unclear scene, weak character development, or dialogue that doesn't feel natural can easily slip past you.


That's where I come in.


I'll read your manuscript from a reader's perspective and provide honest, constructive feedback on what works and what could be stronger.


I'll look at:

  • Pacing and story flow
  • Character development
  • Dialogue
  • Plot and story structure
  • Clarity and continuity
  • Emotional impact
  • World and setting
  • Overall reader engagement


I won't rewrite your story or change your voice. I'll give you an honest second perspective while keeping your vision in mind.


I work with different fiction genres and approach each manuscript with care and attention.


Before you share your story with your readers, let me help you see it through fresh eyes. Send me a message and let's get started!

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

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Mystery

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Romance

Language:

English

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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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    hemantnayak711

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    An exceptional experience with an excellent reader/editor. She not only provides insight into what is working, but importanly points out what needs further work and how you might improve things. I highly recommend her services and look forward to using them again.

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    diasta06

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Lisa is such a great experience. Her feedback was really insightful, and I liked that she didn't just point our what was needed but actually explained why. The constructive criticism helped me notice things I had completely overlooked, and she also pointed out the part of the story that...

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D

    diasta06

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Lisa was absolutely amazing to work with! I really appreciated the time and effort she put into the alpha reading of my manuscript. Her feedback was honest, thoughtful and really insightful. I could tell she paid genuine attention to the story and my characters... She pointed out things I hadn't even...

    $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

4 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(4)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • H

    hemantnayak711

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    An exceptional experience with an excellent reader/editor. She not only provides insight into what is working, but importanly points out what needs further work and how you might improve things. I highly recommend her services and look forward to using them again.

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D

    diasta06

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Lisa is such a great experience. Her feedback was really insightful, and I liked that she didn't just point our what was needed but actually explained why. The constructive criticism helped me notice things I had completely overlooked, and she also pointed out the part of the story that...

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D

    diasta06

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Lisa was absolutely amazing to work with! I really appreciated the time and effort she put into the alpha reading of my manuscript. Her feedback was honest, thoughtful and really insightful. I could tell she paid genuine attention to the story and my characters... She pointed out things I hadn't even...

    $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No