I will fiction manuscript review, developmental editing, plot and character feedback

United Kingdom

I speak English

PRESS KIT EXPERT

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About this Gig

Is your story missing something, or are you unsure whether your plot and characters truly connect with readers? Let's strengthen your manuscript!


I provide developmental feedback for fiction writers who want to improve their stories before publication.

MY SERVICES INCLUDE:

  • Fiction manuscript assessment
  • Plot structure and story development
  • Character arcs and motivation
  • Pacing and narrative flow
  • Plot holes and inconsistencies
  • Chapter-by-chapter feedback
  • A written editorial report, depending on your package


Whether you're writing a romance, fantasy, mystery, adventure, or literary novel, I'll examine your story's strengths and identify areas that may need improvement.


My goal is to help you understand how your story works as a whole and provide practical suggestions while respecting your creative vision.


Please message me before ordering if your manuscript exceeds your package's word limit or requires a different scope of work.


Ready to strengthen your story? Send me your manuscript's word count, genre, and main concerns so we can choose the right package!

Language:

English

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German

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Comic book

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Horror/ thriller

Audience :

Children

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Teen / young adult

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Adult

POV:

First person

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Third person limited

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Third person omniscient

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

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Intermediate

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Advanced

Voice:

Narrative

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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