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I will developmental editing beta reading for litrpg fantasy ya manuscript assessment
BOOK EDITOR
With over 7years of experience, I help writers turn their first draft into a book they are proud of. I offer everything from big-picture story feedback (developmental editing) to fine-tuning your gram...
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About this Gig
You have poured your heart into your manuscript, but now you are stuck. That nagging doubt, "Is the plot compelling? Do my characters feel real?" is the very reason I am here.
I am a professional developmental editor and beta reader who specializes in transforming promising drafts like yours into unforgettable, polished stories. I provide the big-picture, insightful analysis you crave for your YA Fiction, Cozy Mystery, LitRPG, Fantasy, or Romance novel, focusing on plot, structure, character arcs, and pacing to give you absolute clarity.
With my service, you won't just get feedback; you will get your game plan:
- A Detailed Editorial Report diagnosing your story's strengths and weaknesses.
- An In-Depth Annotated Manuscript with live feedback and insights.
- A Custom Actionable Revision Plan: your clear, step-by-step roadmap to revision success.
Stop wondering and start transforming. Let's partner to strengthen your story's foundation and elevate your manuscript to its highest potential. Click "Contact Me," and let's begin.
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Italian
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FAQ
What's the difference between Beta Reading and Developmental Editing?
Beta Reading is a reader's overall impression. Developmental Editing is a professional, in-depth analysis with actionable advice.
Do you fix grammar and spelling?
My focus is exclusively on the "big picture" story elements (plot, character, structure). Fixing sentence-level issues (proofreading) comes after these core elements are solid, as the story may change significantly.
What genres do you work with?
I work with most fiction genres, like Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Romance, Thriller, Literary, and screenplays Features, TV Pilots.
How long does it take?
Delivery time depends on your word count, but I always provide a clear deadline before you order.
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D donnamaltz
United States
Ester is kind and does what she says she will. This was a short project, and I am grateful for her persistence and caring. She helped me improve my writing.
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?D daisy_wolverine
United Kingdom
Esther has worked with me on a couple of projects. Her feedback is very detailed, specific to a character or a plot point and contains advice that I know will strengthen my writing. It has always been far more than I expected and a good balance of positive comments alongside targeted areas for development....
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?B barrie_writer
United Kingdom
Esther proveded a fantastic, fast aand insightful beta read. She was so encouraging, and was also able to identify several weak areas that will make my novel better. Thoroughly recommend!
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?J jane_audrey_
Canada
I am so beyond grateful that I found Esther to beta-read the first part of my story. She went above and beyond my expectations. Her work is worth every single cent I have given her, and so much more. Her feedback was carefully constructed and detailed. She spoke about aspects from a reader's perspective...
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?J john_irby
Repeat Client
United States
I recently had Esther S do an entire manuscript and have been impressed with her detailed and insightful editing skills. As a new fiction writer, she is helping me develop better writing skills with her excellent suggestions. She has also respected my plot, characters, and overall vision for this first...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
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5 reviews for this Gig
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D donnamaltz
United States
Ester is kind and does what she says she will. This was a short project, and I am grateful for her persistence and caring. She helped me improve my writing.
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?D daisy_wolverine
United Kingdom
Esther has worked with me on a couple of projects. Her feedback is very detailed, specific to a character or a plot point and contains advice that I know will strengthen my writing. It has always been far more than I expected and a good balance of positive comments alongside targeted areas for development....
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?B barrie_writer
United Kingdom
Esther proveded a fantastic, fast aand insightful beta read. She was so encouraging, and was also able to identify several weak areas that will make my novel better. Thoroughly recommend!
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?J jane_audrey_
Canada
I am so beyond grateful that I found Esther to beta-read the first part of my story. She went above and beyond my expectations. Her work is worth every single cent I have given her, and so much more. Her feedback was carefully constructed and detailed. She spoke about aspects from a reader's perspective...
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?J john_irby
Repeat Client
United States
I recently had Esther S do an entire manuscript and have been impressed with her detailed and insightful editing skills. As a new fiction writer, she is helping me develop better writing skills with her excellent suggestions. She has also respected my plot, characters, and overall vision for this first...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
