Clear narrative diagnosis to decide what to fix, rewrite, or keep
France
French, English
About me
I provide clear narrative diagnosis for screenwriters and filmmakers who
need clarity before rewriting.
This is not a rewrite service.
I analyze your script to identify what works, what doesn't, why it
doesn't, and what decisions matter next.
My feedback is fast, structured, and human — focused on story structure,
character logic, pacing, and narrative impact.
No generic advice. No vague opinions.
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