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I will beta read, critique, and provide feedback on your writing
Edit Format Publish with confidence
Hi, I'm Ethan, a Christian book editor, theologian, and publishing specialist dedicated to helping authors transform faith-filled manuscripts into polished, publish-ready books.
As a graduate of the...
About this Gig
You finished your manuscript, read through it until the words all jumbled together, and are in need of a fresh pair of eyes to take it to its fullest potential. Great news: I'm the right fit.
With my background in writing and editing, I promise to provide extensive feedback including an in-depth analysis with clear, actionable suggestions for improvement.
- Intro/Ending
- POV/Voice
- Characters
- Pacing/Flow
- Dialogue
- Setting
- Plot Holes & Inconsistencies
- Strengths & areas to improve
You will get: In-line comments of reactions as I read along & a detailed multiple page reader report with constructive feedback.
While reading, I am asking myself:
- Was the story gripping from the very beginning? If not, why?
- Is there any point where the pacing seems too slow or fast?
- Are there any parts of the story that confused me?
- Are there any inconsistencies?
- Is the setting immersive?
- Do the characters & their actions/dialogue feel authentic?
- Does the writing style suit the target audience/genre?
- Is the ending satisfying?
Preferred Genres: YA and Adult Fiction (fantasy, romance, thriller, paranormal, mystery, adventure, litrpg, short stories, horror), Non-Fiction, Philosophy
I do not use AI at all.
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What does your beta reading include?
I provide an in-depth reader assessment covering plot, pacing, character development, POV, dialogue, structure, consistency, emotional impact, reader engagement, and overall manuscript experience. You’ll also receive constructive suggestions for improvement.
Do you provide feedback on both fiction and nonfiction?
Yes. I work with both fiction and nonfiction manuscripts and tailor my feedback to your genre, intended audience, and specific goals.
Will I receive inline comments?
Yes. Depending on the package selected, I can provide inline comments showing my reactions, questions, and observations as I read, along with a detailed overall manuscript evaluation.
Do you edit or rewrite the manuscript?
My primary service is beta reading and developmental feedback, not proofreading or rewriting. I focus on identifying strengths, weaknesses, inconsistencies, and areas that could be strengthened while preserving your voice and vision.
Do you use AI for your beta reading?
No. I personally read and evaluate your manuscript to provide genuine, thoughtful feedback based on the actual reading experience.
