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I will do beta read manuscript feedback litrpg
United States
I speak English, Spanish, German, French
Professional editor, reviewer, and beta reader
I’m Evelyn, a writer, editor, and reviewer with 10+ years of experience working with 40+ authors in LitRPG, Horror, Non-Fiction, and others. I give clear, helpful feedback on characters, plot, pacing,...
About this Gig
Are you an author looking for honest, detailed feedback before sending your book to readers or a literary agent? I'm here to help you see your manuscript through a reader's eyes, clearly, thoughtfully, and professionally.
As a beta reader and alpha reader, I provide in-depth manuscript feedback that goes beyond simple opinions. I focus on story flow, clarity, pacing, characters, structure, and reader engagement. You'll receive a clear story review that highlights what's working, what needs improvement, and how to strengthen your book while keeping your unique voice.
I work with non-fiction, LitRPG, romance, horror, and more, including specialized services as a romance beta reader and horror beta reader. I also point out language issues and light proofreading notes where needed, so nothing pulls readers out of your story.
My goal is to help you deliver a polished, confident manuscript that's ready for the next step, whether book editing, publishing, or submission to a literary agent. CONTACT NOW, let's improve your story together.
Language:
English
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French
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FAQ
Do you correct grammar and spelling?
I include light profreading notes, but this is not a full proofreading service.
Will you rewrite parts of my manuscript?
No, but I clearly explain what needs improvement and why.
Can you help before I submit to a literary agent?
Yes. My feedback helps ensure your manuscript is clear, engaging, and submission-ready.
Can you act as both alpha reader and beta reader?
Yes, depending on your project stage and needs.
Can you review unfinished drafts?
Yes. Early feedback often saves authors time and revisions.
What genres do you read?
I am highly flexible and read nearly all genres, fiction and non-fiction, all the way from children's books through YA and adult fiction.
Are you willing to read part of a book?
Yes. I am happy to read whatever portion of a book you wish to share.
