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I will developmental edit and critique your fiction manuscript
Professional Book Editing, Proofreading and Formatting
Manuscripts meet their match with Marvelous.
Your story deserves more than a quick proofread, it deserves an experienced eye that understands both the craft and the publishing world. With years of pro...
About this Gig
Developmental editing and critique for your fiction manuscript, from a real editor who's worked with published authors on novels, memoirs, and self-help books.
I look at the big picture: plot structure, pacing, character arcs, dialogue, and consistency. You'll get a clear picture of what's working, what isn't, and how to fix it, without losing your voice.
What you get:
- Full manuscript read-through
- Detailed editorial report (strengths, weaknesses, actionable fixes)
- In-line comments on structure, pacing, and character development
- Optional style sheet for consistency (names, timeline, world details)
Packages scale by word count and depth of feedback, from a focused critique to a full developmental edit with revision notes.
Fiction only: novels, novellas, short story collections. Send me your manuscript and genre, and I'll tell you exactly what it needs.
Order now or message me first if you're not sure which package fits.
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FAQ
What's the difference between developmental editing and a critique?
A critique gives you a high-level read on strengths and weaknesses. Developmental editing goes further, with detailed notes throughout your fiction manuscript on structure, pacing, and character. This gig includes both.
Do you edit genre fiction?
Yes. I work across genre fiction, literary fiction, and novellas. Send me your first chapter and genre so I can confirm fit before you order.
Will you change my writing style or voice?
No. Developmental editing focuses on structure and story, not rewriting your voice. Line-level changes aren't part of this gig.
What format should I send my manuscript in?
Word document (.docx) preferred, so I can leave in-line comments directly in the file.
