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Fenella Hayes
@fenellacreative
Professional Novel Critic and Beta Reader
United Kingdom
English
About me
I enjoy reading fiction and sharing honest feedback that helps writers improve their stories. I mostly read romance, fantasy, YA, and general fiction.
My feedback focuses on things like pacing, characters, dialogue, and overall story flow from a reader’s point of view. I like keeping communication simple, clear, and supportive throughout the process.
Skills
Fenella Hayes
Offline •
Average response time: 1 hour
See my services
Beta Reading
I will critique your novel and give detailed reader feedback
Proofreading
I will proofread and edit your research paper or journal manuscript
Work experience
Novel Critique Specialist
NOVEL • Full-time
May 2026 - Present • 2 mos
Work closely with authors to analyze manuscripts and provide thoughtful critiques on storytelling elements. Offer insights into pacing, chapter effectiveness, dialogue realism, plot progression, and character relationships to help writers refine their work before publication.
Fiction Manuscript Reviewer
Fantasy Books For Teens
May 2026 - Present • 2 mos
Review novels and short stories across romance, fantasy, young adult, and contemporary fiction genres. Evaluate story flow, consistency, emotional impact, and reader engagement while providing actionable recommendations that help authors enhance the quality of their work.
Developmental Feedback Consultant
Editor X • Full-time
May 2026 - May 2026 • 0 mos
Assist authors during the revision stage by offering developmental feedback on manuscript structure, character development, world building, and narrative coherence. Create comprehensive feedback reports designed to support stronger storytelling and a better reader experience.
