I will provide insightful and detailed feedback on your stories
Ready to conquer what's keeping you from your creative pursuits!
About this Gig
Please message me before ordering!
Introduction
The time after your first draft can be difficult. You have something closer to a finished product, but you've sunk so much time into it that you don't know how to approach it with fresh eyes. This is a common plight for all kinds of writers. The solution? A reliable, insightful, and detailed pair of new eyes committed to seeing your story go beyond just what it could be!
What is offered?
The basic plan features in-line commentary that focuses on the nitty-gritty of your story's presentation. Advanced plans include in-line sample edits to help you elevate your writing and a personally tailored "reader report" that offers:
- An analysis of the central premise of the story. Does it work? Is it interesting?
- Insight into how your style and word choice convey the tone of your story to the readers.
- A summary of the plot and breakdown of where the strongest moments happen, and where the story drags.
- An analysis of which characters speak to your readers and what that says about themselves, their purpose, and the quality of the story as a whole.
And much more! What are you waiting for? Let's chat!
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Are you able to accept works that are non-fiction or explicit?
At this time, I cannot accept works outside of creative fiction. As far as explicit content is concerned, feel free to message me and ask! I am usually all right with explicit content of a mild nature as long as it is embedded in the context of a larger story.
Are you able to accept works that are in formats other than prose, like poetry or scripts?
My strength is in prose, but I will try my best to provide compelling feedback on a variety of creative works. The focus of this gig is on the aspects and execution of the story and does not feature any kind of formatting or proofreading advice, except where applicable.
It's been several hours and I still haven't gotten a reply to my order/message! What gives?
It could simply be that I'm asleep! I live in a part of the United States that follows Central Time (UTC -06:00). If not, it could be that I'm simply busier than I usually anticipate. Have faith, I'll be back before you know it!
I'm not sure if your feedback style is right for me? What should I do?
Reach out to me! I offer a sample in-line commentary up to 1500 words to give you a taste of my feedback style so you can make an informed decision before you buy and I can get an impression of your writing style so that I can better accommodate my feedback to you! It's a win-win!
What is a reader report?
A reader report is a multi-paged document that elaborates on the various story elements that comprise your manuscript to give you commentary that relates to the story as a whole, including pacing, story/character arcs, and world-building that may not be covered by in-line commentary.
I have a short manuscript (< 25,000). Is a reader report right for me?
Possibly. It depends on the level of depth you're looking for in your returned feedback. My in-line commentary tends to focus on "at the moment" critiques that are added as I'm reading; therefore, they may not touch on the entire structure of the work. A reader report ensures you get that.
Why is the turnaround time for this gig so high?
The time of delivery is meant to give me adequate breathing room to give it as much attention as it deserves. I usually never need the full amount and packages with shorter timeframes are there to help communicate the urgency of your needs.
What are revisions?
I consider revisions to be a "second look" at specific sections of your manuscript you might have made recently revised and you'd like input on quickly without needing to make another order. Please keep these around 3,000 words or less for each revision order.
How do I use multiple revisions if I buy them?
It's up to you! You can redeem those revisions for the same section of your manuscript until you're happy with the updated work or use them across different sections for broader improvement. Please note that once all your revisions are used, you must make a new order to receive more.
Are there any last things that I should know before I buy?
I am a first-time Fiverr seller on the site and you're looking at my first Gig! I'm very proud of having made it this far and I appreciate that you're talking the time to look over this Gig despite my inexperience with the site! Don't let that scare you off, though! I'll work hard for you!
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raniahanna

United States
Ongoing collaborationAs usual, thorough work with excellent communication. This is a repeat order, and I'll keep coming to him!
$100-$200
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raniahanna

United States
Ongoing collaborationAmazing editor and beta reader, I highly recommend him. This is actually my second time turning to his expertise, and I've always been impressed with his communicativeness and skills.
$50
Price
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raniahanna

United States
Ongoing collaborationOnce again, he delivers amazing feedback in a diligent and careful manner. GoandConquer is such a pleasant person to work with, and he is an intelligent beta. I hired him previously, and thought of him immediately when needing a beta for a new manuscript I wrote.
$50
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jamesfinch8

United States
Very professional with a lot of details other readers missed.
$50
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raniahanna

United States
Ongoing collaborationWonderful work and clearly thought out. I will be working with you again in the future.
$50-$100
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raniahanna

United States
Ongoing collaborationAs usual, thorough work with excellent communication. This is a repeat order, and I'll keep coming to him!
$100-$200
Price
Helpful?R 
raniahanna

United States
Ongoing collaborationAmazing editor and beta reader, I highly recommend him. This is actually my second time turning to his expertise, and I've always been impressed with his communicativeness and skills.
$50
Price
Helpful?R 
raniahanna

United States
Ongoing collaborationOnce again, he delivers amazing feedback in a diligent and careful manner. GoandConquer is such a pleasant person to work with, and he is an intelligent beta. I hired him previously, and thought of him immediately when needing a beta for a new manuscript I wrote.
$50
Price
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jamesfinch8

United States
Very professional with a lot of details other readers missed.
$50
Price
Helpful?R 
raniahanna

United States
Ongoing collaborationWonderful work and clearly thought out. I will be working with you again in the future.
$50-$100
Price
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