Just send me your story or script and you will get an honest analysis that goes beyond grammatical errors and awkward syntax. I will be looking at characterization, symbolism, flow, theme, tone, use of metaphorical devices, what your major vices are, and overall readability/acting potential when giving your critique.
These will not be for the easily offended. While I will point out your strengths as well as your weaknesses and will not criticize without advice on improvement, this is not for ego-stroking. These are for writers who are looking to improve.