I will be your developmental editor for manuscript critique and editorial feedback

Helen P

United Kingdom

I speak English, French

Contemporary Romance Beta Reader, Detailed Manuscript Critique And Feedback

Hi, I'm Helen, a contemporary romance beta reader and alpha reader specializing in modern romance, romantasy, and sweet to spicy love stories. Handing over your draft is scary. Does the chemistry feel...
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About this Gig

Before submitting your draft to literary agents or self-publishing on Amazon, your manuscript needs a structural developmental edit to ensure your narrative arc is solid.


As your developmental editor, I provide deep, structural manuscript critiques for fiction (YA novels, fantasy, romance) and non-fiction (memoirs, personal stories).


Whether you wrote your draft for KDP, Wattpad, or Inkitt, I help you refine your manuscript into a polished, publish-ready book.


Core Areas:

  • Narrative Arc & Structure: Reviewing plot points, act breaks, and overall story framework.
  • Pacing & Chapter Flow
  • Character Arcs & Voice: Checking motivation, dialogue authenticity, and character growth.
  • Line-Level Polish: Offering sample line edits to enhance readability and tone.


What You Receive:

  • Comprehensive Editorial Report: An in-depth assessment analyzing structural strengths, weakness points, and narrative flow.
  • Developmental Inline Comments
  • Actionable Revision Roadmap: Clear, step-by-step guidance on how to revise your manuscript.


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Language:

English

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French

Genre:

Children’s books

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Cookbooks/ recipes

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Lifestyle

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Audience :

General readers

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Children

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Teen / young adult

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Adult

POV:

Objective / neutral

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

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Intermediate

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Advanced

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Voice:

Active

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