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Henry Orchard

@henryorchard

Fiction Developmental Editor and Story Consultant

United Kingdom
English
About me
I specialise in developmental feedback for fiction, helping writers strengthen plot, structure, character motivation, pacing, worldbuilding and internal consistency. I offer both focused reviews of specific concerns and broader developmental critiques of outlines, short stories and manuscripts. My approach is analytical and practical: I identify what is working, where the story may become unclear or unconvincing, and what could be strengthened, while keeping your voice central.... Read more

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Developmental Editing
I will provide a developmental critique of your fiction
From$15 / projectMore details
Developmental Editing
I will stress test your story outline before you start writing
From$15 / projectMore details

Work experience

Fellowship_of Fans

Writer / Film Critic

Fellowship of Fans

Jul 2026 - Present • 3 mos

Write and develop published film reviews twice weekly for Fellowship of Fans, focusing on argument, structure, narrative analysis and editorial direction. I shape each piece from its central angle through to publication, refining its structure, coherence and critical argument to produce clear, engaging criticism.