I will critique your fiction story for plot and characters

Nigeria

I speak English, Spanish, French, Thai

Beta Reader, Book Editor, Book Cover Designer, Video creator

I help authors turn ideas and manuscripts into polished, engaging, and visually compelling work. My focus is on honest feedback, thoughtful editing, strong book covers, and creative AI videos that bri...
About this Gig

Have you finished writing your story but need an honest reader's perspective before publishing?


I will beta read your fiction manuscript and provide thoughtful, constructive feedback to help you understand how your story connects with readers.


At Kehinde StoryWorks, I focus on the reading experience, helping you identify what works well, what feels confusing, and where your story could become more engaging.


WHAT I WILL REVIEW:

  • Plot development and story flow
  • Character development and consistency
  • Dialogue and readability
  • Pacing and reader engagement
  • Emotional impact
  • Confusing scenes and continuity issues

WHAT YOU WILL RECEIVE:

  • Honest and constructive reader feedback
  • Detailed beta reader report
  • Chapter-by-chapter comments (based on package)
  • Story strengths and areas for improvement
  • Suggestions to strengthen your manuscript


I welcome fiction manuscripts across different genres, including romance, fantasy, mystery, thriller, science fiction, young adult, and contemporary fiction.


Your story deserves thoughtful attention. Let me help you see your manuscript through a reader's perspective.

Please contact me before ordering if your manuscript exceeds the selected package word limit.

Genre:

Fanfiction

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Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

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Mystery

Language:

English

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Spanish

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.