I will proofread your novel, story or script and find plot holes

Is your story ready for another pair of eyes?

I will proofread and review your novel, short story, screenplay, script, or other fiction, while looking beyond simple grammar mistakes.

As someone with a strong interest in science fiction, fantasy, movies, TV shows, games, and pop culture, I enjoy looking at stories from a reader's perspective and asking:

• Does the plot actually make sense?
• Are there contradictions or plot holes?
• Does a character suddenly behave differently without explanation?
• Are there continuity errors?
• Does the timeline work?
• Are there unexplained events, abilities, technologies, or character decisions?
• Does the story establish a rule and later break it?
• Are there parts that may confuse the reader?
• Does the story remind me too closely of a familiar trope or existing work?

Especially interested in

• Science fiction
• Fantasy
• Superhero stories
• Horror
• Screenplays & movie scripts
• Video-game stories
• Novels & short stories