I will beta read your story and provide constructive feedback

JackM

United States

I speak English, Chinese

Fantasy and fiction beta reader and developmental editor

Hi, I'm Jack! I'm a current publishing intern, former English teacher, and experienced editor with interests in fiction and fantasy. I am here to provide incisive, kind feedback that helps your story ...
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About this Gig

I offer an honest report about the reading experience, a technical eye for inconsistencies, and suggestions that strengthen your story and unique voice.


You will get specific feedback on the following:

  • Plot and structure
  • Pacing (narrative urgency)
  • Character development
  • Readability (show vs. tell, tone, word choice, concision)
  • Worldbuilding/system
  • Overview of my reading experience
  • Detailed answer to specific concerns you have, if applicable


The above list will be headings in the report. I'll tie everything together at the end and send it over in a PDF.


Above all, I know it's not easy to share your writing. I'm thankful you chose me, and I'll approach your work with care and respect.

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Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

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Language:

English

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