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jacquelinemaho
@jacqueline_maho
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Beta Reader, Story And Character Development, Specialist Feedback that Elevates
Nigeria
English, French, Spanish, German
About me
Beta Reader | Story & Character Development | Honest Feedback
I’m Mahone, a professional beta reader and developmental editor with years of experience helping authors strengthen their manuscripts. I provide honest, practical feedback on plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, emotional impact, consistency, and reader experience. With a PhD in Linguistics, experience as a university creative writing instructor, and 17 published books, I bring both a genuine reader’s perspective and an editor’s eye. I’ll show you what works, what feels unclear, and where your story can become stronger.
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I will alpha, beta read romance sci fi horror dark fantasy thriller novel beta reader
Translation
I will translate japanese to english, german to english, spanish to english, french
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beta reader
Fiverr • Freelance
May 2022 - Present • 4 yrs 5 mos
Beta Reader | Story & Character Development Specialist | Feedback that Elevates Your Writing I’m Mahone, an experienced beta reader and publishing expert with over 12 years in the industry. I specialize in delivering insightful, detailed feedback that helps authors refine and perfect their manuscripts — strengthening compelling characters, strong plots, and smooth pacing. With a PhD in Linguistics from the USA, I’m also a best-selling, award-winning author of 17 books in fiction and popular science. I’ve received multiple prestigious reviews and have helped authors secure agents. I offer expert beta reading, developmental editing, coaching, agent critique packages, and more. Former university creative writing instructor and publishing house veteran. Let’s elevate your story.
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garykowalski626
United States
Ongoing collaboration
I am very impressed and happy with the beta read Jacquelinemaho did for me. Being that this is my first writing experience, I was very overwhelmed by the steps needed after the initial storytelling. She made was very easy to work with, delivered a very detailed report on my story including not only...
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kaka3548
United Kingdom
I’ve found your advice really helpful. I’ll be in touch soon to discuss some of the specifics, but overall, I truly appreciate having an outside perspective and receiving honest, constructive feedback. It’s been valuable to see things from a different point of view.
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mistyshar
United States
She is excellent. Provided a broad overview that covered the entire book separately and also provided comments on the manuscript in places that needed improvement, marking out risk areas, which gives the author a plan to improve the plot and highlight areas that needed work. I will definitely hire her for future beta reading work.
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shawn_mc93
United States
Mahone was such a pleasure to work with. She was super attentive and gave me a ton of advice that I used to help better my manuscript. I could tell she really took her time to give me the best advice. I would recommend Mahone to anyone.
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garykowalski626
United States
Ongoing collaboration
I greatly enjoyed working with Jacquelinemaho. Both her beta read analysis and subsequent editing was of my manuscripts was eye opening. She was able to keep my voice and concepts of where I was going with my story. Mostly she made me feel that my manuscripts have value. Thank you Jacquelinemaho. I really appreciate your effort.
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