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jacquelinemaho
@jacqueline_maho
Beta Reader, Story And Character Development, Specialist Feedback that Elevates
United States
English, French, Spanish, German
About me
I’m Mahone, a publishing expert with over 12 years of experience and a PhD in Linguistics. I specialize in beta reading and developmental editing that strengthens compelling characters, strong plots, and smooth pacing.
As a best-selling, award-winning author of 17 books (fiction & popular science), I’ve received prestigious reviews and helped many authors get agented.
I offer beta reading, developmental editing, agent critique packages, and coaching. Former university creative writing instructor.
Let’s elevate your manuscript.
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Beta Reading
I will alpha, beta read romance sci fi horror dark fantasy thriller novel beta reader
Translation
I will translate english to french, german to english, spanish to english book editor
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beta reader
Fiverr • Freelance
May 2022 - Present • 4 yrs 2 mos
Beta Reader | Story & Character Development Specialist | Feedback that Elevates Your Writing I’m Mahone, an experienced beta reader and publishing expert with over 12 years in the industry. I specialize in delivering insightful, detailed feedback that helps authors refine and perfect their manuscripts — strengthening compelling characters, strong plots, and smooth pacing. With a PhD in Linguistics from the USA, I’m also a best-selling, award-winning author of 17 books in fiction and popular science. I’ve received multiple prestigious reviews and have helped authors secure agents. I offer expert beta reading, developmental editing, coaching, agent critique packages, and more. Former university creative writing instructor and publishing house veteran. Let’s elevate your story.
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nelsonwil531
United States
She delivered excellent feedback and exceeded all my expectations. As a new author, I was nervous and didn't know what to expect, but she went above and beyond. The quality and value of her feedback were incredible, especially for a first-time client like me. I can't thank her enough for her honesty, insight, and encouragement. Highly recommended!
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andersonjohn604
Singapore
Working with Mahone was one of my first experiences with a beta reader, and I'm so glad I took the leap. She provided a thorough developmental edit, offering thoughtful, honest feedback that highlighted both the strengths of my manuscript and the areas that needed improvement. Her insights helped me...
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william20006
United States
Working with her as a beta reader was an incredibly rewarding experience. Her feedback was thoughtful, insightful, and deeply impactful, helping me identify ways to strengthen my character’s interiority and bring more emotional depth to the story. She has a remarkable ability to articulate not only what...
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helen_jane3580
Italy
An exceptional beta reader with a strong understanding of epic fantasy, a rare and valuable skill in such a niche genre. She also grasped the dark fantasy elements of my story with remarkable insight. Her feedback was thoughtful, balanced, and honest, highlighting both the strengths and the areas that...
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john_mcy
Repeat Client
United States
I really enjoyed working with Mahone. She was easy to communicate with, and her feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and exactly what I needed. You can tell she truly cares about helping authors improve their work. I'd happily work with her again and highly recommend her.
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