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jacquelinemaho
@jacqueline_maho
Beta Reader, Story And Character Development, Specialist Feedback that Elevates
United States
English, French, Spanish, German
About me
Beta Reader | Story & Character Development | Honest Feedback
I’m Mahone, a professional beta reader and developmental editor with years of experience helping authors strengthen their manuscripts. I provide honest, practical feedback on plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, emotional impact, consistency, and reader experience. With a PhD in Linguistics, experience as a university creative writing instructor, and 17 published books, I bring both a genuine reader’s perspective and an editor’s eye. I’ll show you what works, what feels unclear, and where your story can become stronger.
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I will alpha, beta read romance sci fi horror dark fantasy thriller novel beta reader
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I will translate japanese manga, doujinshi comic, german, french, spanish, to english
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beta reader
Fiverr • Freelance
May 2022 - Present • 4 yrs 3 mos
Beta Reader | Story & Character Development Specialist | Feedback that Elevates Your Writing I’m Mahone, an experienced beta reader and publishing expert with over 12 years in the industry. I specialize in delivering insightful, detailed feedback that helps authors refine and perfect their manuscripts — strengthening compelling characters, strong plots, and smooth pacing. With a PhD in Linguistics from the USA, I’m also a best-selling, award-winning author of 17 books in fiction and popular science. I’ve received multiple prestigious reviews and have helped authors secure agents. I offer expert beta reading, developmental editing, coaching, agent critique packages, and more. Former university creative writing instructor and publishing house veteran. Let’s elevate your story.
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nelsonwil531
United States
She delivered excellent feedback and exceeded all my expectations. As a new author, I was nervous and didn't know what to expect, but she went above and beyond. The quality and value of her feedback were incredible, especially for a first-time client like me. I can't thank her enough for her honesty, insight, and encouragement. Highly recommended!
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garykowalski626
United States
I am very impressed and happy with the beta read Jacquelinemaho did for me. Being that this is my first writing experience, I was very overwhelmed by the steps needed after the initial storytelling. She made was very easy to work with, delivered a very detailed report on my story including not only...
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andersonjohn604
Singapore
Working with Mahone was one of my first experiences with a beta reader, and I'm so glad I took the leap. She provided a thorough developmental edit, offering thoughtful, honest feedback that highlighted both the strengths of my manuscript and the areas that needed improvement. Her insights helped me...
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kaka3548
United Kingdom
I’ve found your advice really helpful. I’ll be in touch soon to discuss some of the specifics, but overall, I truly appreciate having an outside perspective and receiving honest, constructive feedback. It’s been valuable to see things from a different point of view.
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william20006
United States
Working with her as a beta reader was an incredibly rewarding experience. Her feedback was thoughtful, insightful, and deeply impactful, helping me identify ways to strengthen my character’s interiority and bring more emotional depth to the story. She has a remarkable ability to articulate not only what...
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