I will provide 5 pages of professional coverage for your script

Is your script ready for the industry, or is it just "finished"?

Most scripts are rejected not because the dialogue is poor, but because the narrative structure is unstable. As an MFA-trained Screenwriter and former University Writing Professor, I've spent over 15 years looking "under the hood" of stories to identify the invisible structural fractures that lead to a "Pass."

I provide a full diagnostic audit of key areas. No opinions. Whether you're prepping for the Nicholl Fellowship, Austin, or an upcoming pitch, I apply the same rigor I used to mentor graduate-level writers to ensure your story is strong enough to sustain a 110-page journey.

What I analyze in your Diagnostic:

• Character: Does your lead have true agency, or are they being "pushed" by the plot?
• Stakes: Are the consequences of failure escalating, or is the tension flatlining?
• Structure: Identifying Act II "sags" and logic collapses before they reach a producers desk.

Why work with me?

• MFA in Screenwriting (Graduate-level craft).
• Disney/ABC Fellowship Finalist (Vetted by industry standards).
• 10+ Years in the LA Production Ecosystem (I know what "filmable" looks like).
• Former Professor (Mentor-level feedback).