I will give helpful, insightful feedback on your film or TV script

Whether it's a short film, a pilot episode or a genuine epic - your script can benefit from a fresh set of eyes on your script. I give notes in easy-to-understand terms that will leave you knowing what you need to do next to make your script as good as it can be.

All of my feedback provides at least the following;

• My gut reaction. My overall impression of the script.
• Main Action Points. If you address nothing else in this script, address these points!
• Story. Your opening, your ending, anything in-between; what does it need to make it work?
• Style/Craft.  The rules and conventions of scriptwriting can be overwhelming, confusing and inexplicable. I spent three years and lots of money learning this stuff, let me help.

Depending on your project's needs I may also include additional sections addressing elements of your writing such as Dialogue, Structure, Theme or a Miscellaneous section for critique and observations that don't fit neatly elsewhere.

I'm not interested in tearing anyone's work to shreds, I think every script can be better and every writer can benefit from pointers in the right direction.

I look forward to reading your work!