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Jerry Brasfield
@jerry_editor03
BETA READING, DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING, COPY EDITING, LINE EDITING, BOOK FORMATTING
United States
English, French, Spanish, German
About me
Professional beta reader specializing in romance, fantasy, mystery, thriller, historical fiction, dark romance, paranormal, and YA. I provide detailed, thoughtful, and actionable feedback on plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, emotional impact, worldbuilding, and reader engagement. My approach is honest, constructive, and genre-aware, helping authors identify what works, what needs strengthening, and how to create a more engaging manuscript. Have a manuscript ready? Message me with your genre and word count.
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Fiverr • Freelance
Jan 2026 - Present • 7 mos
Provide professional beta reading and manuscript feedback for fiction authors, specializing in romance and related genres, including dark romance, fantasy, mystery, thriller, historical fiction, paranormal, and YA. Deliver detailed, thoughtful, and actionable feedback on plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, emotional impact, worldbuilding, story flow, and reader engagement. Provide chapter-level insights, honest reader reactions, and practical suggestions to help authors strengthen their manuscripts and prepare for publication. Also provide editing support for clarity, consistency, grammar, readability, and flow while preserving the author's unique voice and style.
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kimmich_sylvia
United States
Ongoing collaboration
If you want honest, constructive truth that will actually improve your manuscript, this is the reader to hire. They did not just give generic compliments; instead, they dug deep into the narrative arc, flagging specific plot holes and tracking my main character's development perfectly. Their feedback...
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kimmich_sylvia
United States
Ongoing collaboration
Working with this seller was an incredible experience. They provided insightful, thorough, and highly constructive feedback on my manuscript. They caught plot holes I completely missed and offered fantastic suggestions to improve character development. Communication was prompt, and the delivery was right...
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beyoncedorothy
United States
Ongoing collaboration
Thank you so much Jerry, for some really exceptional feedback. Jerry gives detailed, chapter by chapter break downs, with analysis and suggestions that really help the editing process and, where needed, guide the future structure of the story. I am very grateful for his kind, considerate work which...
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palomamateo78s
Spain
Great experience working with Jerry! He understood exactly what I needed for the beta reading and provided thoughtful, helpful, and detailed feedback. His attention to detail and professionalism really made a difference in improving my project. Communication was smooth throughout the process, and he...
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abramo_azzurra
Italy
It was very great working with Jerry. She did well for me. She was able to help me beta read my book and provide me with a very detailed feedback to improve my book and make it great generally. I love what he did and I'll get back to him for more works in the future. Thank you so much, Jerry.
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