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I will beta read noir, gothic, psychological, domestic suspense

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

107 orders completed

Stylistic Line Editor and Professional Beta Reader

I screen submissions for a reputable literary journal that publishes high-quality genre fiction, literary-genre blends, novel excerpts, flash fiction and contest finalists and have seven years' experi...

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

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About this Gig

Is your subtext doing the heavy lifting or are mechanical plot points crowding out the suspense? Is the dread earned organically on the page or are your reveals too overtly foreshadowed? Let's ensure your micro-tension is fully calibrated and your narrative execution carries the psychological depth, emotional weight and visceral grip your readers crave. Whether you've written a gritty procedural, a dark romance filled with power imbalances or a literary mystery rich with metaphor, I'll offer collaborative-style feedback, highlighting what's effective and identifying opportunities for refinement with a focus on examining how structural pressure and psychological layers hold the story together. I tailor my feedback to the specific sub-genre: interiority and atmospheric density for gothic and horror; dialogue and voice for hard-boiled; period verisimilitude for historical; moral ambiguity, sensory imagery and narrative payoff for noir; emotional calibration and intrigue for domestic or romantic suspense. Actionable feedback is provided via in-line comments and a report: friction, psychological and plot plausibility, narrative velocity, reader expectations and ending satisfaction.

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

Language:

English

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Reviews

86 reviews for this Gig
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    coffee_spoons

    US

    United States

    5

    Absolutely excellent! This is the second time that I have used Jessica to beta read. Her insights on my first manuscript helped me get my now agent who sold that book in a significant two-book deal. This beta read was for the second book, and she absolutely delivered. Her insights are sharp, actionable,...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    No
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    thrillerauthor1

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    This was my second time working with Jessica and she continues to thoroughly impress me! I shared a first draft of my thriller novel to get her feedback before it goes to my agent and she reviewed it incredibly quickly, but so many amazingly helpful notes. It was really helpful to see what she loved,...

    $200-$400

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    thrillerauthor1

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Jessica was a dream come true. She was a beta reader for my psychological thriller novel and gave me incredible helpful notes, truly going above and beyond my expectations. Both her overview letter breaking down each element of the story and responding to it as well as her notes within the manuscript...

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • N
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    nicw2019

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Jessica again on my third psychological thriller has exceeded my expectations again but I say this each time I work with Jessica. The minute I finish a manuscript, Jessica is the first person I reach out to to read before I heavily edit, simply because I trust her professionalism, her insights...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    susan_swartz

    US

    United States

    5

    Jessica went above and beyond my expectations! She was not only thorough she was thoughtful with all suggestions. She also found and noted missing punctuation. I was stunned at the quality for the quantity of work at such a low price. I will definitely be leaving a tip as she must have put in far more work than for what she charged. Amazing!

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

86 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(86)
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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
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Most relevant
  • C

    coffee_spoons

    US

    United States

    5

    Absolutely excellent! This is the second time that I have used Jessica to beta read. Her insights on my first manuscript helped me get my now agent who sold that book in a significant two-book deal. This beta read was for the second book, and she absolutely delivered. Her insights are sharp, actionable,...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    thrillerauthor1

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    This was my second time working with Jessica and she continues to thoroughly impress me! I shared a first draft of my thriller novel to get her feedback before it goes to my agent and she reviewed it incredibly quickly, but so many amazingly helpful notes. It was really helpful to see what she loved,...

    $200-$400

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    thrillerauthor1

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Jessica was a dream come true. She was a beta reader for my psychological thriller novel and gave me incredible helpful notes, truly going above and beyond my expectations. Both her overview letter breaking down each element of the story and responding to it as well as her notes within the manuscript...

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • N
    image-docs

    nicw2019

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Jessica again on my third psychological thriller has exceeded my expectations again but I say this each time I work with Jessica. The minute I finish a manuscript, Jessica is the first person I reach out to to read before I heavily edit, simply because I trust her professionalism, her insights...

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    susan_swartz

    US

    United States

    5

    Jessica went above and beyond my expectations! She was not only thorough she was thoughtful with all suggestions. She also found and noted missing punctuation. I was stunned at the quality for the quantity of work at such a low price. I will definitely be leaving a tip as she must have put in far more work than for what she charged. Amazing!

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No