I will help your college essay stand out while keeping your voice

Your college essay should sound like you just the strongest version of you.

I provide admissions-focused feedback designed to strengthen your college essay or personal statement while preserving your authentic voice.

This service goes beyond proofreading. I review your essay with the admissions process in mind, focusing on what your writing communicates about who you are, what matters to you, and what a reader may take away from your story.

Feedback may include:

• Storytelling and narrative development
• Structure and flow
• Introduction and conclusion
• Authentic student voice
• Reflection and personal insight
• Alignment with the prompt
• Clarity, grammar, and sentence structure
• Repetition or overly general language
• Specific recommendations for improvement

I can review Common App personal statements, supplemental essays, scholarship essays, and other undergraduate admissions essays.

I will not write your essay for you or replace your voice. My goal is to help you communicate your story more clearly, intentionally, and confidently.

Tell your story. Keep your voice. Make it memorable.