I will proofread and help improve your screenplay, pilot, or pitch

What sets me apart is over a decade of experience in the entertainment industry, including writing for a major network television series and successfully developing and selling multiple film projects.

I'll read your script or pitch closely and give honest, thoughtful coverage that highlights what's working and what needs sharpening. I'll help you with format and give clear notes on structure, character, dialogue, and pacing plus specific suggestions to help elevate your story and get it closer to being ready; whether for a contest, an agent or manager read, or for production.