I will developmentally edit your fiction for plot and character psychology

Does your story hold a readers attention? Do your characters choices feel believableand their struggles matter?

As a published author and accredited psychotherapist, I approach your manuscript from three perspectives:

As a reader: Does it draw me in, sustain tension, and deliver emotional impact?

As an author: How effectively do plot, pacing, structure, dialogue, and character arcs work together?

From a psychological viewpoint: Are motivations, relationships, internal conflicts, and responses to trauma convincing within your story?

I provide honest, constructive developmental feedback with practical suggestions for revision. Ill identify what works, where the story loses momentum, and opportunities to deepen your characters while preserving your voice.

This service focuses on story development rather than proofreading or line editing. Choose a package based on your word count, or message me to discuss a longer manuscript.