I will beta read your fiction novel and provide detailed reader feedback

Jolie

Brazil

I speak Portuguese, English, Spanish

Beta Reader, English Teacher, Honest and Detailed Feedback

Hi, I'm Jolie! As an English teacher, passionate beta reader, and virtual assistant, I'm dedicated to helping authors, educators, and small businesses shine. I provide detailed, constructive manuscr...
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About this Gig

The First Chapters Gut Check (Up to 2.5k words - Basic - $5): Includes a high-level Reader Report with an Overall Rating, a Quick Score Table (110 on Plot, Characters, Dialogue, Pacing), and bulleted feedback on what worked.


Narrative Health Check (Up to 7.5k words - Standard - $10): Includes a complete Reader Report detailing overall impressions, areas for improvement with actionable suggestions, reader questions, and favorite moments. Plus: Live inline margin comments (reactions to dialogue/beats).


The Deep-Dive Developmental Look (Up to 15k words - Premium - $25): Includes the full Standard Report layout plus Dedicated Character Analysis (motivations/arcs) and Plot Analysis (stakes/worldbuilding/pacing), alongside extensive inline text commentary.


Message me to more information! Let's make your story shine!

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Genre:

Adventure

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Children’s books

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Fanfiction

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Romance

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Fantasy

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Other

Language:

English

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Portuguese

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