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I will give script coverage, feedback, notes for TV film or screenplay, story analysis
Film, TV Writer, Scriptwriter, Editor, Ghostwrite
Hi, I’m Jon, a professional Film & TV Writer, Scriptwriter, Editor, and Ghostwriter specializing in movie scripts, feature films, TV pilots, shorts, web series, screenplay rewrites, dialogue polishing...
What people loved about this freelancer
bethkauffman6
United States
Jon did an excellent job with my script coverage. His feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and very helpful. He clearly understood the story and provided constructive...
bethkauffman6
United States
He took the time to carefully read through the script, analyze the story, characters, pacing, and overall flow, and then provided clear and useful coverage....
bethkauffman6
United States
I’m extremely happy with the script coverage Jon provided! He went through my script carefully and gave me detailed, thoughtful feedback that was genuinely...
About this Gig
You've finished your script, but is the story actually working on the page?
Maybe you've already gone the traditional script coverage, or you've simply reached the point where you need an experienced perspective, someone to give you an honest appraisal of the script and a realistic assessment of how it may read to agents, producers, or industry readers.
I provide thoughtful script coverage, screenplay feedback, story analysis, and development notes for TV pilots, feature films and screenplays. The goal is not to rewrite your story into something else, but to show you what is working, what is holding the script back, and what may need attention before you take the next step.
What I will review:
- Story structure (beginning, middle, end)
- Hook strength and opening impact
- Pacing and flow of scenes
- Clarity of story progression
- Weak sections
- Overall audience engagement
I wont simply tell you that something isnt working. I'll explain why it isnt working, where the issue begins, and what you can do to strengthen it.
Stop guessing what your script needs, get an objective appraisal, identify what may be holding it back, and move forward with greater clarity and direction.
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Dutch
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English
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FAQ
What will I receive with your script coverage?
You’ll receive clear, practical feedback on your story, structure, pacing, characters, dialogue, strengths, weaknesses, and the areas that need the most attention in your next rewrite.
Do you cover feature films, short films, and TV pilots?
Yes. I provide script coverage for feature films, short films, TV pilots, and movie scripts across different genres and page lengths.
Will you rewrite or change my screenplay?
No. This gig focuses on script coverage, feedback, notes, and analysis. I will point out what is working, what needs improvement, and give you clear direction without taking over your voice.
Is the feedback honest or will you only focus on positives?
You’ll receive balanced and honest feedback. I’ll highlight what already works, but I’ll also clearly explain the weaknesses, confusing areas, plot issues, or pacing problems that may be holding the script back.
Can I tell you specific areas I want you to focus on?
Absolutely. If you’re worried about dialogue, pacing, character arcs, plot holes, the ending, or any specific scene, let me know before I begin and I’ll give those areas extra attention.
Is my screenplay kept confidential?
Absolutely. Your screenplay will be handled privately and will never be shared, published, or used as a sample without your permission.
Which file formats do you accept?
You can submit PDF, Microsoft Word, Final Draft, or another editable script format. Please contact me first if you require delivery in a specific software format.
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Ongoing collaborationJon did an excellent job with my script coverage. His feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and very helpful. He clearly understood the story and provided constructive notes that gave me a better direction for improving my screenplay. I really appreciated his professionalism, attention to detail, and the...
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?B bethkauffman6
United States
Ongoing collaborationHe took the time to carefully read through the script, analyze the story, characters, pacing, and overall flow, and then provided clear and useful coverage. The process was smooth, and I’m very happy with the feedback and insights he provided. I would definitely work with Jon again!
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?B bethkauffman6
United States
Ongoing collaborationI’m extremely happy with the script coverage Jon provided! He went through my script carefully and gave me detailed, thoughtful feedback that was genuinely helpful. I really appreciated the level of insight and attention he put into the coverage.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
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B bethkauffman6
United States
Ongoing collaborationJon did an excellent job with my script coverage. His feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and very helpful. He clearly understood the story and provided constructive notes that gave me a better direction for improving my screenplay. I really appreciated his professionalism, attention to detail, and the...
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?B bethkauffman6
United States
Ongoing collaborationHe took the time to carefully read through the script, analyze the story, characters, pacing, and overall flow, and then provided clear and useful coverage. The process was smooth, and I’m very happy with the feedback and insights he provided. I would definitely work with Jon again!
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?B bethkauffman6
United States
Ongoing collaborationI’m extremely happy with the script coverage Jon provided! He went through my script carefully and gave me detailed, thoughtful feedback that was genuinely helpful. I really appreciated the level of insight and attention he put into the coverage.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
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