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I will beta read, critique, beta reader fantasy, romance beta reader, thriller reader
About this Gig
HELLO AUTHORS,
You finished your manuscript. Now you're staring at it, wondering if it actually works.
Maybe your pacing drags in the middle. Maybe your fantasy world feels confusing, or your romance leads have zero chemistry on the page. Maybe you're not even sure what's wrong, you just know something is off, and you're too close to see it.
That's the problem with writing alone. You can't unread your own book. Every plot hole, flat character, or slow chapter hides in plain sight because you already know how the story "should" go. Meanwhile, agents, editors, and readers won't be so forgiving, they'll just stop reading.
I'm Ayomide, and I read fiction the way your future readers will: fresh, honest, and paying attention to everything that pulls me out of the story.
As your beta reader, I'll flag pacing issues, weak character motivation, plot holes, and confusing world-building in fantasy, romance, and thriller manuscripts. You'll get a detailed critique covering what's working, what isn't, and why, plus honest reader reactions, not just vague praise.
Stop guessing whether your book is ready. Send me your manuscript, and let's find out together.
Language:
English
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German
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FAQ
Will you just tell me what I want to hear, or give it to me straight?
I'll always be honest, but never harsh for the sake of it. If your pacing drags or a character isn't landing, I'll say so clearly and explain why, along with what's already working. You're paying for a real reader reaction, not empty praise.
How is this different from hiring a full editor?
A beta read focuses on the big picture: story, pacing, characters, world-building, and whether the book holds a reader's attention. I'm not correcting grammar or rewriting sentences here, I'm reading as your audience would and telling you where the story succeeds or loses me.
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Yes. Your work stays completely confidential, isn't shared or used anywhere else, and remains entirely yours. I only keep it as long as needed to complete the read.
What if I don't agree with some of your feedback?
That's completely normal, and expected. My notes are there to help you see your manuscript from a reader's perspective, not to dictate rewrites. You decide what fits your vision and what doesn't, I just make sure you're seeing the full picture before you decide.
