I will professionally beta read your story and provide a feedback
Professional Fiction Ghostwriter and Beta Reader
About this Gig
Have you ever thought about how people will feel when they read your story?
A good story is not only about what happens on the page, it's about how people feel when they read it, how they like the characters and how they keep reading until the very end.
As a beta reader, I offer honest, thoughtful, and constructive feedback to help authors understand what works, what can be improved, and how to make their stories more impactful.
I will review your manuscript from a reader's perspective, focusing on:
- Plot & Story Structure
- Pacing & Flow
- Readability & Natural Dialogue
- Character Development
- Plot Holes & Inconsistencies
- World-Building
- Overall Reader Experience
My feedback will always be honest, respectful, and helpful. I'm here to help you improve your manuscript, highlight its strengths, and help you understand how your story makes readers feel.
Your story deserves to become someone's favorite book!
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Which format shoud I send my manuscript?
I prefer Word (.doc/.docx) or PDF formats, but I’m happy to work with other formats as well.
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Absolutely! I respect your privacy and confidentiality. Your manuscript will never be shared with anyone or used in any way. Your work is safe with me.
Can you provide a sample of your work?
I respect the privacy and confidentiality of other writers, so I’m unable to share previous client samples. However, I’d be happy to provide a free 500-word critique of your manuscript so you can experience my feedback style. You can also try my Basic package to see if we’re a good fit.
Do you write in-line comments?
I currently focus on providing detailed feedback through a comprehensive reader report instead of in-line comments. This allows me to give a more organized and in-depth analysis of your manuscript.

