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I will beta read, romance beta reader, psychological thriller, suspense, fantasy reader
About this Gig
Your manuscript is finished, but something feels off.
Readers lose interest around chapter 12. The twist doesn't hit the way you planned. A character makes a choice that doesn't fit who they are. You can't see it anymore because you're too close to the story, and agents and readers won't tell you why they stopped.
Querying or publishing with these flaws costs you requests and reviews.
I'm the fresh pair of eyes that tells you. As a horror beta reader, thriller beta reader, Sensitivity reader, psychological thriller reader, romance beta reader and beta reader fantasy, I give honest feedback on what's working and what isn't.
WHAT I FOCUS ON
- THE BOREDOM METER I mark every spot where my attention drifts, so you know exactly what to cut or tighten.
- THE SUSPENSE ENGINE I test your tension, your hooks, and your twists. Do they build, or do they fizzle?
- CHARACTER LOGIC I flag any moment where a character acts in a way that breaks their own logic
Send me your story and get clear, kind, straight to the point notes you can act on today.
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What genres do you beta read?
I focus on romance, thriller, YA contemporary, children book and fantasy, so I can give feedback as a genuine reader of your genre, not a generalist.
What kind of feedback will I get?
It's built around what you ask for. Whether that's plot holes, pacing, character motivation, or chapter-by-chapter reader reactions, tell me your priorities and I'll tailor my notes to them.
Do you edit or proofread my manuscript too?
No, this is a beta read focused on the reading experience, not line editing or proofreading. I'll flag what's working and what isn't from a reader's perspective.
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beatricesage
United States
Ongoing collaborationKafilah is such a wonderful person to work with. She is very professional, friendly, and easy to communicate with. She has excellent communication skills, is always patient and understanding, and makes every conversation pleasant. She is also very friendly and easy to chat with. I truly enjoyed working...
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Helpful?B beatricesage
United States
Ongoing collaborationKafilah did a great job beta reading my novel. Her feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and helpful, and she pointed out areas I can improve while also sharing what worked well. I really appreciate her time and effort and would happily recommend her to other authors!
$50
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5 days
Duration
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hannahcollins95
United States
Ongoing collaborationExcellent Seller! Very professional, responsive, and easy to work with. The service is exactly as described, and I'm really happy with the result. Highly recommended and I will surely hire her for my future project. Thanks Kafilah!
$50
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3 days
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drramsey
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationWorking with drramsey is wonderful, he is open to communication and calm to chart with, one thing about him is just deliver a quality work to him and be time conscious with this you are good to work with him. Thank you for trusting me with your project and looking forward for to do more with you thanks, Kafilah.
$50
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3 days
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Helpful?S sabrinalamb
United States
Kafilah was hired to review my book manuscript. She communicated regularly regarding her progress and review approach. She delivered a professional review and has a deep understanding of editing and publishing. She is fluent in English. She also review the characters' arc and illustrations.
$100-$200
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3 days
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8 reviews for this Gig
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B beatricesage
United States
Ongoing collaborationKafilah is such a wonderful person to work with. She is very professional, friendly, and easy to communicate with. She has excellent communication skills, is always patient and understanding, and makes every conversation pleasant. She is also very friendly and easy to chat with. I truly enjoyed working...
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
K Seller's Response
Helpful?B beatricesage
United States
Ongoing collaborationKafilah did a great job beta reading my novel. Her feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and helpful, and she pointed out areas I can improve while also sharing what worked well. I really appreciate her time and effort and would happily recommend her to other authors!
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?H hannahcollins95
United States
Ongoing collaborationExcellent Seller! Very professional, responsive, and easy to work with. The service is exactly as described, and I'm really happy with the result. Highly recommended and I will surely hire her for my future project. Thanks Kafilah!
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
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Helpful?D drramsey
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationWorking with drramsey is wonderful, he is open to communication and calm to chart with, one thing about him is just deliver a quality work to him and be time conscious with this you are good to work with him. Thank you for trusting me with your project and looking forward for to do more with you thanks, Kafilah.
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
K Seller's Response
Helpful?S sabrinalamb
United States
Kafilah was hired to review my book manuscript. She communicated regularly regarding her progress and review approach. She delivered a professional review and has a deep understanding of editing and publishing. She is fluent in English. She also review the characters' arc and illustrations.
$100-$200
Price
3 days
Duration
K Seller's Response
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