I will beta read your fantasy or sci fi manuscript with actionable feedback

Beta reader for fantasy and sci-fi authors preparing their manuscript for revision or publication.

I focus on how the story reads to an engaged genre reader what works, what does not, and what may lose readers if left unaddressed.

What you will receive:

In-document comments capturing real-time reader reactions (what engaged me, what felt flat, where tension dropped or peaked)

A structured feedback report covering:

• Plot (setup, progression, payoff, plot holes)
• Pacing (slow sections, rushed moments, momentum)
• Character development (emotional impact, consistency, relationships)
• Worldbuilding (clarity, depth, internal logic)
• Overall engagement and readability

Chapter-by-chapter notes to guide revisions

My feedback is honest, specific, and aimed at helping you strengthen the manuscript before the next stage.

Note: Please message me before placing an order so I can confirm genre fit, word count, and turnaround time.

Ideal for authors preparing for revision, querying, or self-publishing.