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I will provide a developmental edit for your fiction book
Fiction book editor
Hi there. I'm Laney. A passionate editor and writer with a degree in English literature and formal training in creative writing and editing.
Whether you're looking to polish your manuscript, develop...
About this Gig
A developmental edit offers advice and suggestions for the story's development.
Welcome to my gig! As your friendly developmental editor, I'll offer thoughtful feedback and suggestions to help you refine your manuscript and bring your story to its full potential.
What to Expect: After carefully reading your manuscript and noting any inconsistencies or areas for improvement, I will provide a tailored editorial report (10+ pages) with detailed feedback and actionable advice to help elevate it.
My editorial report includes feedback on:
- Plot
- Pacing
- Character Arcs
- POV
- Setting
- World-building
- Dialogue
- Theme
- General advice and support!
Feel free to message me with any questions or to create a custom order for your number of words!
Rate: $0.005 per word
Please note:
- This gig is for developmental editing only. If you need physical adjustments to your book (line editing, copy editing, proofreading, or section rewriting), I have separate gigs specifically for that.
- If you'd like In-line comments on Google Docs, please note that there is an additional fee.
- Please contact me before placing an order.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is developmental editing ?
after the writer finishes their manuscript , a developmantal editor reads over their work and provides them with feedback on how they can improve the flow and clarity of their manuscript . This process is very important before the publication of a novel.
What genres can you edit?
i can can edit any genre , but i'm mostly excited about romance stories haha
what can i expect if i purchase this gig?
I'll read your story and write down notes as I go along. After finishing, I'll put together a reader's report that covers various aspects as mentioned in the description :)
why should i choose you to edit my novel?
Because I'm also a writer and I have the skills required to edit your novel. I have a great eye for detail and am honest when it comes to my opinions. So I will provide you with constructive feedback that will definitely elevate your work!
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basharhabbash
United Kingdom
Very nice and on time :)
Up to $50
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7 days
Duration
Helpful?G gelop2111
United States
She wrote out chapter by chapter what was done right and what needed a little tweaking. It was detailed enough that I could go back to the chapter and after reading her suggestions and pinpoint what part she was referring to. It helps ya see it from a different pov for sure. :)
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?G gelop2111
United States
Super nice and responsive. Asked for a debrief on what worked, what didn't, and other suggestions and that's exactly what she did :).
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?B bhoward345
United States
Excellent work. Very happy with the results! Working on my manuscript with Laney has been the best guidance. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?V vincent7953
United States
Laney provided a brief and useful editorial and provided very helpful suggestions for my manuscript! Definitely recommend!
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
36 reviews for this Gig
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| (1) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
B basharhabbash
United Kingdom
Very nice and on time :)
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?G gelop2111
United States
She wrote out chapter by chapter what was done right and what needed a little tweaking. It was detailed enough that I could go back to the chapter and after reading her suggestions and pinpoint what part she was referring to. It helps ya see it from a different pov for sure. :)
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?G gelop2111
United States
Super nice and responsive. Asked for a debrief on what worked, what didn't, and other suggestions and that's exactly what she did :).
$50-$100
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?B bhoward345
United States
Excellent work. Very happy with the results! Working on my manuscript with Laney has been the best guidance. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?V vincent7953
United States
Laney provided a brief and useful editorial and provided very helpful suggestions for my manuscript! Definitely recommend!
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?
