I will critique your romance beat sheet

Get your romance novel in shape before it's even written!

I'm an experience romance writer (and reader!) and very familiar with romance structure and conventions. Plenty of romance novels struggle because they miss out on hidden requirements of the genre, or lose readers as a result of fixable mistakes. I'll read your outline/beat sheet with an eye for:

• compelling characters
• tightly-structured plots
• snappy pacing
• building tension
• satisfying payoff

If you've ever struggled with issues like, "What are they even going to talk about in this scene?" or "How can I (believably) get them from hating each other to making out??" then this service is for you. Something like a boring conversation might seem as though it's a problem with that specific scene, but actually it comes from the underlying structure of the book (if the plot was driving them forward, they'd have plenty of exciting conversations about it!).

Get your outline critiqued by an expert and avoid problems like target confusion, dangling plot threads, and lackluster chemistry before they start!