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Leo Mary
@leo_video1
Beta Reading Expert for Fiction
United Kingdom
English
About me
I'm Leo, a beta reader and manuscript reviewer based in the UK. I provide detailed, actionable feedback on fiction, nonfiction, and memoirs, helping authors improve pacing, character development, plot structure, and overall readability. I've worked across genres including fantasy, romance, thriller, mystery, and self-help. Whether you need a full manuscript critique or chapter-by-chapter notes, I give you honest, constructive feedback that helps your book reach its potential.
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Leo Mary
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Average response time: 1 hour
See my services
Beta Reading
I will be a beta reader, beta reader fantasy, romance beta reader, thriller beta reader
Beta Reading
I will beta read your self help, motivational book and give actionable reader feedback
Work experience
Freelance Beta Reader & Manuscript Consultant
Adidas Italia • Self-employed
Oct 2025 - Present • 7 mos
Provided detailed beta reading and manuscript feedback for independent authors across multiple genres including fantasy, romance, thriller, mystery, and self-help. Delivered structured reports covering plot consistency, pacing, character development, dialogue, and overall readability. Helped authors identify weaknesses before submission or self-publishing, resulting in stronger, more polished manuscripts.
Book Reviewer & Literary Critic
Tech & Authors • Self-employed
Mar 2021 - Jan 2025 • 3 yrs 10 mos
Reviewed and critiqued fiction and nonfiction manuscripts within online writing communities and author groups. Provided constructive feedback on narrative structure, tone, voice, and genre conventions. Collaborated with writers at various stages of the drafting process, from early rough drafts to near-final manuscripts, offering actionable suggestions to improve reader engagement and story flow.
