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LILLY HARDARSON
@lilly_hardson
Helping Authors Craft Stories Readers Can't Put Down
United States
English, Spanish, German
About me
Hello, I’m Lilly a passionate beta reader and manuscript critic helping authors improve their fiction and nonfiction before publication. I provide honest, thoughtful, and constructive feedback from a genuine reader’s perspective. I review romance, fantasy, thriller, mystery, horror, science fiction, young adult, memoirs, self-help, and more. My feedback covers plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, emotional impact, reader engagement, clarity, and overall reading experience. I read with care to help make your manuscript stronger, more engaging, and ready for readers.
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LILLY HARDARSON
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Average response time: 1 hour
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Beta Reading
I will beta read critique romance beta reader fantasy leitor sci fi and thriller books
Beta Reading
I will beta read your self help and nonfiction book with actionable feedback
Work experience
Professional Beta Reader & Developmental Editor
Editio Publishing • Self-employed
Feb 2025 - Present • 1 yr 6 mos
As a professional beta reader and developmental editor with over 6 years of experience, I have helped authors strengthen their manuscripts through detailed beta reading, honest critique, and reader-focused feedback. Working with writers across multiple genres, I evaluate every story from the perspective of your ideal audience while providing actionable suggestions that improve the overall reading experience. My expertise includes romance beta reader, fantasy beta reader, thriller beta reader, YA beta reader, horror beta reader, science fiction, cozy mystery, dark romance, and general fiction beta reader services. I also work with complete novels, novellas, and works in progress. During my beta reading process, I analyze plot structure, pacing, character development, dialogue, emotional impact, voice consistency, world-building, reader engagement, and story flow. I provide thoughtful manuscript critique that helps authors identify strengths, uncover plot holes, strengthen character arcs, and create a more compelling reading experience. My goal is not to rewrite your work but to deliver honest, constructive feedback that preserves your unique voice while helping you produce a stronger manuscript. Whether you need an alpha reader for early drafts or professional beta reading before publication, I provide reliable, detailed insights to help your novel reach its full potential.
